Superb stories, loved it very much please continue to write up to the latest doctor eleven.

(First note: fix typos)

This one is definitely still bouncing around in my brain, too. Excellent! The question is, where does he go from here? :)

Fab update. I loved your selection of quotes that really brought home the chapter.

And DT's acting was the most wonderful thing to watch. He is usually amazing, but in this episode he really showed his brilliance when it comes to acting.

Great special and a great chapter! x

Why not, indeed :) Nice touch!

Really sweet :)

Pfft, I haven't reviewed on here for so long, I'd forgotten my password. And about the "human verification" thing. "Are you human?" No, actually, I'm a Vespiform in disguise. Tuh. (That's supposed to be a tutting sound btw. ) Anyway, I'm as out of practice at reviewing as you've been at writing (stop it, I know you've been having trouble with it :P), so I hope I'll be forgiven for this. *insert worried smile here*

**"“... Do you think there’s really something up there? Living up there?”"**

Oh, I wish. :(

**"“You’re not going all ‘Christmas Carol’ epiphany on me are you?”"**

Going all what?

**"“... I’ve woken up with the biggest urge to run, see the world...”"**

Haven't we all at some point? That's why I've stopped worrying so much about what my exam results will say, I just want to get away and go to uni. I will go, and I'll go with a tan, by hook or by crook. (Don't you just love these old phrases? :)) *is stubborn*

**"“To Owen and Tosh,” Ianto said."**

Did you do that on purpose? Owen, Tosh, Ianto... no? *sob*

Well, I can't think of any other comments to give now. I'm so glad you got round to doing these, I've really missed them. :) Sorry this is shorter than I used to make them, I'm a little rusty in the art of reviewing. :/ Anywho, I'm going to jump over to review the next one, so I'll see you there!

PS. This is going insane while I type, and I don't know why.

Is there are Filler for 'The Next Doctor'?

Or for 'The Planet of the Dead'?

you have done really well, this is really good

hey thanks for the update keep up the good work!

You know, you should really edit out the doubling-up on the first sentence in the document manager... :P

**"Anyway, enough rabbiting!"**

Lol, I really should take a leaf out of your book.

(I can hear another creepy-crawlie buzzing around and it’s making me really nervy. :S Ahahahaha, got it. Thank God for university prospectuses that I don’t actually want. xD)

Anyway...

**"“But he's not you,” Rose told him.

“He needs you. That's very me.”"**

Gah, is it just me or does he really not get what she means? Surely he’d understand that it’d be like trying to fall in love with a completely new person. It’s not THE Doctor. Grr. *strops*

**"She wanted to run to her daughter and explain what she’s just missed but this is their moment."**

Wrong tense, surely? Shouldn’t that be "what she’d/she had just missed" and "this was their moment"? I don’t do English Language, but I do study Spanish and French. I know a bit about tenses. ;P

**"“I swear on my lives...” He frowned. “life. I swear on my life.”"**

Lol sweet, he almost forgot he can live a human life now. Strange, I’m so used to reading ‘lives’ it took me a moment to get my head around this new Doctor.

**"Hm, maybe I should revisit Jack and Mickey..."**

Now here I’d usually say “Yes, please do!” but really, haven’t we all had a gutful of Martha? More than that, I’d say. Although I would love to see how her relationship with the lovely Tom Milligan is going. :) And yes, I am that much of a geek.

Well, this is a shorter one, but I’m sure you’re breathing a sigh of relief about that. I’m about to paste this into the review-window and it’s not even midnight! How about that then, eh? Anywho, I finally got them done: I told you I would. :P And now I'm orf. Spik spoon.

Lovely :)

I thought the same thing about the Doctors and their hands/bodies; loved your "Just the opposite way round" line :)

Aww, that was so cute.

good chapter, I like how it was from Jackie's pov...and I definatly want one with Jack and Mickey and Martha and TORCHWOOD!

I loved it! when I first watched the ending I was in Tears. When Rose was between the two Doctors, I was yelling at the screen "TELL HER!" and when I was reading this, I was also in tears. you are a good writer, keep up the good work :)

Awwh... Lovely. And I really like the idea of revisitng Jack and Mickey :) I'll say it again, 'cause I mean it; lovely.