| Reviews for Harry Potter: Unchampion |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 7/20 You should have warned your readers in the summary that this was a harry/ginny story. I hate those and wouldn't have started this story if you had. |
 X.pix.X chapter 1 . 6/30 Hilarious story |
| derl chapter 1 . 5/22 awwwww that was really nice |
| anon chapter 1 . 5/16 Okay this story is overall pretty good but I'm super confused about 1 part. Why are people constantly surprised by obvious patterns? The best example is how Harry spends 3/4 of the story going "I'm just a normal dude, right? Why do I constantly find myself in dangerous situations?" and then Sirius is like "Dude. You're the BWL. It's Voldemort, dumbass." and Harry was like "I hadn't thought of that!" like wtf how had he not? Also Dumbledore and the other judges are surprised when Harry does the minimal amount of effort for task 1, 2 AND task 3. like He's literally done the same the every time why the fuck did you not expect this? Again the story is good and you should read it but that part infuriated me. |
| stevem1 chapter 1 . 3/27 A very well written Harry Potter AU. He essentially tries to “Accio” his way through the Tri-Wizard Tournament. When that fails, he shrugs his shoulders, calls it done, and takes his 0. All to very good results. Recommended. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3 Got a bad case of Threshing grains that's to funny at least once a month I come back to read that part |
| Matt chapter 1 . 10/22/2019 I've noticed in more than one of your stories you use chaff when you mean chafe (the difference is one f instead of two). Even when using words such as chafed, or chafing, there's still only one F. Chaff is a word; however, it has nothing to do with rubbing. Chaff is the debris left over when threshing grain. |
| halleberry1995 chapter 1 . 10/21/2019 BRILLIANT |
| Zile0 chapter 1 . 10/10/2019 Great story! |
| KnowInsight chapter 1 . 10/8/2019 nice! |
| HPandPJO4ever chapter 1 . 9/6/2019 This is really good! |
| lschierer chapter 1 . 7/11/2019 I hope you really do plan to make this first in a series. |
| Miss Millie chapter 1 . 6/10/2019 Hello, Very good story! Wish you had them in France at school, it would have benn fun. Maybe someone will write Harry and Ginny at another school. Have a great week. |
| christinemarie13 chapter 1 . 5/16/2019 I liked this. I tend to like when Harry confronts Dumbledore more (I think all the Dumbles-bashing fics have made me resent him too much lol) but I realize not every story is going to be so confrontational. Plus it is more mature even if I do enjoy him getting chewed out. |
| Elfin69 chapter 1 . 4/27/2019 Would have loved to see what all they found and then Dumbledore's reaction to Harry leaving Hogwarts and he not being able to do anything. |
