the focus of this story is unclear and it's bouncing all over the place

love the story so far. very sad, but very well written. so cant wait for the next chapter. if u need help with the songs part for light to sing let me know, i got some poems u can borrow for this fic if u want to use them that is.

Wow this story makes so little sense it's absolutely amazing!

Cheers!

interesting fic. however, i think it was a little too much of...well, everything, i guess, lol. like, there were way to many things going on with Raito, and there were a lot of characters. the thing i liked teh least, though, was that the characters were really over the top, i felt. anyway, like i said, it was still interesting to read

OMG! please? update? or have you abandoned this? TTTT

Its a great story I can't wait to read the next chapter update soon.

okaay...now this story is none like anything I've ever read before, very... interesting.

I'm loving and enjoying your story and am looking forward for an update soon.

Unfortunately I can't help with names cause I myself suck at it lol...hope others help you with it.

anywayz update!

NWG

I love this its different than most DN fanfic ,Keep writiing :)

Please dont give Up on this..:( keep writing this i like it :)

hm, interesting! i really want to know what happens next! please update again soon? and keep up the awesome work!

thanks!

-Crystal-chan.

Very interesting story, I look forward to seeing where you take it.

WOW... this is great! when you mean raito is thinner is he like ouran high school host club kind of thin? cuz that would be the best kind of thin for raito the young hooker.

interesting story I would love to get to read more

OMG! God, this is such a great story. I don't even mind the grammer. . Can't wait for chapters. Especially can't wait to see what you do with L. .;

wow umm this is amazing