Nice story, well written! It wasn't hard to imagine this situation, and you really made me sympathize for Jack. :) Good job!

Since when is Jack quoting BA Baracus? Dahn, dahn, dahn! Dahn, dahn, dahn, dahn!

Nice. I love the rum-induced hallucinations. Quite hilarous in a twisted way. And that bit about the father-son relationship between the Turners.

I didn't know where else to write this, so I am writing it here and hope you read it. I have read almost all your pirates stories, and I must admit they are all a stroke a genius.

But I just have to say this. I have noticed many places in your stories you seem to have confused the meanings of at last and at least. It is quite frankly driving me nuts.

At last: finally. fx he has won at last

At least: if nothing else. fx at least he still had his good humor.

I hope you don't take offence at me correcting you. I really love your writing and hope you will keep at it.

au revoir

Loved it thanks for sharing x

Tres Bon! Je pense que cette histoire est tres amusant et original! Jack est vraiment 'in character'.

loved it!

I was watching an episode of Cold Case Files where a woman named Dawn Magyar was raped and murdered in a Michigan sugar-maple grove in the early to mid-seventies. Anyway, the weapon was thrown in the river nearby, found by a boy who gave it to the police and was traced to a man named Robert Shaw. Mr. Shaw denied any wrongdoing and he gave a sample of his DNA because he wanted nothing to hide. He was cleared. Anyway, Mr. Shaw was loading a case of wine at the loading dock where he worked and the name Gerald Weingart came to mind, and Bill Kurtis said what Mr. Shaw found out "would give new meaning to the term In Vino Veritas." Cool, huh? Mr. Weingart was found guilty of felony rape and murder, because his DNA matched that of the killer. Unfortunately, Dawn Magyar left behind a widower and child.

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

Good work! Like how Will left him his necklace so he'd know he was there. Feel sorry for Jack out there all alone.

aw that was so cute and funny

This story is great. While the characterisation is streached a bit, there actions are still suiting and the tale as a whole is very entertaining and a great (albeit quick) read. The atmosphere and pace are excellent. Well done.

Oh...my...gosh! I'm in tears! This is, by far, the BEST Jack/Will story I have EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE! Amazing! Absolutely incredible! I loved it!

J'adore (quatre o, mais bien sûr il n'en restera qu'un. J'ado. o. o. ore). Tu as très bien saisi le caractère de Jack ! C'est toujours un plaisir de te lire !

You are truly a magnificent writer. I loved this story and how you defined the complex relationship that is Will and Jack. Brothers really is the best word to describe it.