| Reviews for Split Personality: Demon's Retribution |
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   LunaUchiha20 chapter 4 . 6/29/2018 UPDATE PLEASE! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2015 You do realise that having a space in between the speach marks and what's being said isn't correct English grammar, right? Whether you realise it or not please fix your mistakes. That will make for a better story. |
| Gaara's Demon Sister Shi chapter 4 . 12/14/2013 this is a good story so far please finish it |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2013 temari |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2013 narumari lol |
| SkyLeafClover chapter 4 . 7/29/2013 Continue please.i love this story |
| The Sith'ari chapter 4 . 7/14/2013 I'm curious as to when you'll post the next chapter, this is a very good story and I'd like to see more of it, the since you haven't updated since 2008 you should have gotten a lot of chapters done, heck I wouldn't be surprised if you you had wrote the final chapter for the story with how long it has been since you last updated this story. |
| Anime100 chapter 4 . 7/3/2013 This is very interesting; please update soon |
| fantoshiro chapter 4 . 1/21/2013 i love Kenshin |
| Dregus chapter 4 . 9/17/2011 actually, my vote is for anko, haku, kyu, and yugito to be in the harem as well |
| ChaosRune chapter 3 . 5/26/2011 Too many clichés! cliché attack ChaosRune! Critical Hit! ChaosRune defends! Clichés calls reinforcements! 4 more appear! ChaosRune dies! rez? All kidding aside, the plot is great, but you have too many clichés in the fic, Villagers Beat Nauto! Meeting Kyuubi at a Young Age! Orochimaru appears from nowhere! Naruto feels bad from killing his tormentors! Emotional Mask Naruto! And may others. While I know its hard to come with something new in fics this days, the reader still get the feeling he has read similar fics in the past because of the clichés. If you could remove some of them, or tone them down, this fic could be even better |
| Darknessflamesaiyan chapter 4 . 3/12/2011 When are you going to update this story |
| sexypotter chapter 4 . 2/1/2011 congratulation naruto/Tenten/Temari/Tayuya/Oc/Anko/kurenai/femkyuubi/Nii Yugito/hinata/koyuki/shion/mei/fu/femhaku/isarabi/hana |
| Shigiya chapter 4 . 1/31/2011 the story is great dude and is it possible to add hinata in the harem as well? |
| Devilsummoner666 chapter 4 . 12/28/2010 update and make the chapters longer |
