No offence but rape really. That's the reason why SOPA is taking yours and anyone else's stories.

wtf chapter 12 sucks ballz

what a pussy to pass out dumb faggot

technically if you look at it like this if vergil and dante are naruto's father then nero would be both naruto's brother and cousin

you are not the only one i read 5 diffrenzt fanfic with this brown onbu animal in it, and hayate had chronic coughing ha had a lung problem

sakuras says SHANNARO idiot

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it.

i love your story but the relationship are rushed but somehow not rushed enough for lemon surprisingly. still the plot is good just add more detail and a bit of filler.

wtf that's supid as shit he just meets her and he agrees to teach her his STYLE of sword fighting and to live with him sorry but that's not believable at all im out

the formal way to say father is chichiue not chichiwai

NOW THATS FUNNY OR PUNY

nice one about making sasuke a girl now would sasuke like that in the movie i bet he's furious right now HAHAHAHAHHA

I love this story can Naruto master his inner darkness in the next chapter? after all darkness cannot be destroyed it can only be channeled!

why is it that ever time i read a fucking fanfic that naruto gives his shit away like that part where he just RANDOMLY starts to train Ten-ten, or that same part where he says he'll never leave sasukei that balls... Look if you gonna write the fanfic at least put some explanation to why the fuck he does them.
Apart from that it was a good chapter and an even better story line.

a1: stay as girl. a2:oh hell yeah:-D!