Good hearted Jacob, loving Bella. The feud that him think that it might be better if she had died. I remember him saying the same thing another time, even if that time he said he was sorry.

I'm glad Edward realizes at least some of what is happening with Bella. The last two sentences are great.

Lighthearted Emmett could also be quite serious. He saw Bella as his little sister, and saw more than he might be expected to see. This is an xcellent Emmett.

Carlisle with his compassion, especially for Bella and what he saw had become of her, makes me sad for him.

I like that Alice thought that maybe Bella might have been thinking of Edward.

You did a great job of capturing the voices and thoughts of each of the characters. I know how hard it is as a writer to change the voice for each person, but you are amazing with it. Thanks for sharing with the rest of us.

I would love it if you maybe expanded on each chapter a little more (except for the Jacob one!). It's really good now too though! Love!

Jacob doubting himself as well as Bella.

Thanks for sharing these different pov's for Bella's attempt at cliff diving or...whatever it was.

Edward's thoughts well put.

So much more to Emmett than usually shown.

Nicely put from Rosalie's POV.

Insightful Esme. The best one to really wonder.

So intense until Hurricane Edward, Mt Vesuvius, PTES...so well put.

Nice and thoughtful Carlisle.

A little harsh, but reasonable from his point of view.