Reviews for Chocolate Milk |
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Blue Lagoon Loon chapter 1 . 2/6/2011 Yum yum! Chocolate cereal does indeed hit the spot in the morn after a nice piping hot coffee. I had to lawl from his drinking the choco milk, since I do that too. (And that happened to me as well... well, except the embarrassment of being seen.) Excellent job here. ) |
fefe77777 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 ROFL I think this smile is permanately plastered on my face today :3 Poor Kaiba . . . got caught did'nt you . . . wonderful story :3 |
me chapter 1 . 8/9/2008 this made me really really happy for some reason good show |
Kukki Boo chapter 1 . 5/15/2008 That was odd and awesome and I love it. The random thoughts about coffee makers and imaginary sex goddesses were very fun. But hey, at least Seto learned a lesson. |
Avalon's mists chapter 1 . 3/10/2008 "lilac silk dressing gown"? Kaiba's actually Christopher Chant and this proves it. |
Mersedes chapter 1 . 12/17/2007 Oh my God. That was one one-shot that could have gotten me to snort chocolate milk out of my nose. Anyways. My favorite line you ask? It most definitely MUST be this one: "I'd marry you, if it were legal..." That is hilarious. You really did a good job with your humor. You realy pulled it off. What I liked most was your inclusion of Seto's "morning thoughts" because we all know how nutty Seto can get without his morning coffee. Adding in Mokuba annoying Roland was a great touch-it brings the other characters into the spotlight, if only for a moment, but it shows that you as a writer have not forgotten them. Good job! Ha! I can just imagine Campion carrying off those rabid fangirls. AGAIN, and I'm sure you must tire of this, good job with including Seto's thoughts-which were UBER hilarious (especially the one about invoking that sex goddess. That was kind of hot _). I also loved how you portrayed Seto's indecision as he is about to drink the chocolate milk. He berates himself for slobbering, which I found amusing, and then spills milk all over himself-and SOMEONE CATCHES HIM! The end was perfect. "Shit." Yep, that's exactly what Seto's going to be in. Thank you for this one shot. It really brightened up MY day. ~_~ |
Imperfect Human chapter 1 . 11/21/2007 That was hilarious! Poor Seto. Paranoia and arrogance is not a good combination. Great job. |
Amani Hershel chapter 1 . 11/12/2007 Found you over YGOTAS oishixbakura here I love your style of writing. The discrption was wonderfully amusing, and the last minute loss of control really worked for me. A wonderful peice of litature :3 |
Frathworth and Butts chapter 1 . 10/17/2007 Hahahaha (chokes on air) hahahaha, cough, cough, hahahaha! That was simply brilliant! How did you come up with that? Love the fic! Huggles and kisses |
Hikari Amaya chapter 1 . 9/12/2007 Very cute and funny! I'd love a picture of Seto drinking chocolate milk from his cereal bowl! But this should have been rated much higher for langauge. You should change it to "T" to be more appropriate. - Amaya |
FleaBee chapter 1 . 9/11/2007 Very well written, I just loved the line ‘I’d marry you, if it were legal, sweet coffee maker…’ I had to stop myself from laughing out loud. I like how he looks around for the paparatzi and still gets a photo take. |