could you do one with the ra-seru in it? in the game it gave the impression they died, and I don't like that ending, besides, a sim seru (apparently) lived

Oh, that was SO CUTE at the end! I loved Nara and Thoram, I usually avoid stories with lots of OCs in 'em like the plague, but they were absolutely adorable! I'd love to see more of them! _

I really liked your portrayal of all the other characters too, and the catacombs where the Bio Castle once was, and your writing style and... XD; Okay, I just really liked this story in general. I liked your other story, too! It would be awesome if you'd write some more Legaia fanfiction, I'd love to read it!

To be totally honest I feel you should continue the story. I have played and own legaia and the story is considerably accurate though I don't recall gillium being in the bio castle he might have but, I can't remember. All in all I liked the story.

P.S. I am a heavy legaia fan.

The sequel was as good as the first one! I hope that you write a sequel to this one only with the kids as teenagers! That would be tight as whoa! Anyways, keep up with the good L.O.L stories!

~~WPY

In answer to your question: YES! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY! YOU HAVE TO, PLEEEAASSE?

In answer to your question: YES! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY! YOU HAVE TO, PLEEEAASSE?

I love your story. I love Nara and Thoram and the other children. You could make this into a series, Of all the children, and please write more about baby Cort!

Good...but, WHERE'S CORT!

I love this! I think Noa and Vahn make the cutest couple! They deserve each other! Good job! Make a sequel!

Great Fanfic!You should make another one about Nara growing up.I will read this fanfiction again!

good story.

That was great! I hope to see more of you LOL ficS!

WRITE MORE!i LOVE THIS STORY!

Noooooo! i wanted to know what happened!*pouts* Keep writing :)

I really love your story. It's the best Legend of Lagaia story that I've read. Please continue