omg. THIS FLAME I'M ROY MUSTANG! *SNAP SNAP*

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lol i liked it! it really gives Nina and Ed some perspective. More than the anime did. :P

This was really sad, but exetremely interesting, i really wanted to read what Nina felt like when she changed.

Argh, how sick did that just sound, well to me anyway.

I loved Nina, i don't care if she was only in two episodes she was the cutest, sweetest little thing, and i was in tears and close to throwing up when i saw what happent to her.

It made me sick to my core, but this wasn't so bad, still makes me ill, but it's good.

Great Job!

Finally found some time to review. Well. I already told you what I think in person! But you should really write more FMA at some point, you handle the characters really well.

Awesome FMA-debut story. I love how Ed starts to imagine himself as a beast. I especially like how he slapped both legs to get feeling the feeling back and moved on. It was a great allusion.

I hope you have more to share.