This was very intresting. and i end up going from "stupid manwhore lavi" to feeling attached to him. it was when kanda got mad at lavi and forces him to give him a bj.

This one was very.. interesting.

Somehow, this Lavi (as i prefer to spell his name .) is both very IC and at the same time, so very OCC. I am sorry that I cannot explain it well.. I don't even know myself what I mean.

I liked it though... Very much!

Just dropping by to say I really appreciate the piece. I rarely read Lavi fics but the way you describe him really makes him come alive. Despite his conventional way of doing things (well, everything about him) he comes off as very likable and believable. Great job and keep up the good work!

Lovely! lolz, for the moment, I kinda liked the lavi/allen scene here. lolz a seconds of loving lavi/allen than lavi/kanda. now It makes me want to try this lavi/allen pairing as well, as I'm running out of source for my beloved lavi/kanda fics.

again, thanks for a beautiful fic~

What can I say, it was really well-written an beautiful, though ended in a (sad-not-my-taste-at-all) way. Do write a sequel!

Poor Kanda, casting away the only person he loves. Poor Lavi as well, it wasn't his fault, he's not allowed to have feelings.

He'd better say it next time..

*LAUGHS* My, do you know how to set up an intriguing scenario...! It's somehow extremely satisfying to see Lavi as such a sexual deviant. The instensity of this take on his personality and actions is a wonder to behold, but it sticks. Why? Because your mastery of dialogue shows off your wit and skill as a writer while staying character-accurate. Go innocent Lenalee and caustic Kanda. I see this fic as an exceptionally "sexy" interpretation of the characters, but they're well-rounded besides the carnal theme; that's the difference between the (artfully) erotic (you) and the (gratuitously)pornographic (not you) (and okay, with a heavy dose of the crack! comedic somewhere in there too.)...and then of course I come to the end and through character interaction its perfectly crafted as "tragic" too. I find it amazing that you wrote something this raw and took into account Lavi's canon emerging sentimentality too. Sorry to ramble, this entire thing had me grinning like the Chesire cat, and then genuinely moved.

NO WAT HAPPENED TO THE LAVIxKANDA! _

Wow. I love the characterization of Lavi in this. I've always liked his struggle with "A Bookman has no need for a heart," and you've done well with that. He used to be a cold person who would use people like that, but now Allen's changed him.

I do feel bad for Kanda, though. Poor guy. I think he did love Lavi and had his heart broken.

(sniffles) sad ;_; but good. i loved it ne!

are you going to update? (cheers) if you do, that'd be great _ s'a cool fanfic! one of the best i've read for this anime.

O...M...G...

I logged onto my dead profile just to review this masterpiece...I cried at the end...I didn't cry in the manga because there wasn't a real feeling of an end for Lavi/Rabi...but here...it was just...ionno. You gave them such a background that made sense and...Kanda seems like a human now...and Lavi's dark side...it's just all so brilliant. Thank you for writing this. Thank you. It just touched me so much.

That was amazing! It was somewat dark and you're ideas flowed together so well and fit in with the what took place in the manga, not to mention the great sex scenes. All i can say is Wow. Plz continue to write more fics cause u have a real talent for it.

Poor Kanda, i feel so bad for him. All he wanted was to be loved, oh well...

Wow. Wow. Wow. One of the best pieces of fanfiction I have ever read. Your writing style is fantastic, and having each section really added unity to the piece. I personally agree with your perception of Rabi being a sort of man-whore. I can see it too, so you're not the only one. The way you wrote Rabi was perfect; from his actions to his feelings, to just his speech in general. A truly wonderful job! I'm adding this to a C2, hope you don't mind!

Hope to see more from you in the future, as this was, once again, magnificent!

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