This is good and deep!

Nicely written

simply beautiful..

Oh how i looove this kind of drama. Looooove it!

ugh it was good bit i kinda have a bad feeling inside ;o; xd

Super, super, super. Lovely writing style. Simple with enough description for it to remain vivid and enough thought into character that you can connect. It's not perfect but I really liked the way you wrote this. It was disjointed but it worked, it still flowed. Nice write.

ths mad me sad plz wrote ,morefor it

Deep.:)

This story was epic in its own rights. I really loved how you broke it down into accessible chunks, it made the story flow with ease and I ended up getting really into it!

Great piece, hope to read more of your stories.

One word: deep.

:)

I honestly love this. It's got the bite of reality which is something I always look for but rarely find. I love that she sews and what it symbolises; I love that Kakashi screws someone else. Most of all, I love that in the end, they're still not together. Not often do you see a story in which they really do crumble under the weight of being student and teacher.

One or two grammar mistakes but they were probably typos. Very solid overall.

Seriously - love this. One of the best one-shots in the genre.

aww.

he misses her.

its so obvious.

Gah. oh well (:

Thanks for writing!

Oh man this WAS angsty! Loved it, though.

Quite abstract, your writing. :)

I enjoyed your story. I liked how Sakura was able to leave him behind and not be some love sick depressed girl. thank you!

Pretty good :) I'm not sure how else to describe it, aside from that XD It was a pretty detached form of writing, compared to what I normally read, even for third person, but it worked and made the plot a little more interesting. Personally, I would've included a few details here and there, but it is fine as is. Good work :D