Seriously, the twins should have been disciplined at some point. Instead they grew up to be evil bullies.

I have to admit, I don't like Percy that much. This story, though, kind of makes me think of him in a different way. Plus, it's wonderfully written.

Poor Percy! I'm interested to know where this story goes next - update soon please?

That's so sad!

Nice story so far. I've always felt sorry for Percy, he never really fit into his family. I can see this being part of canon.

Hello, just wanted to say that I really love your story so far. I've always found Percy fascinating, and I love your take on him. Can't wait to see more!

Stormy

Good job. You make it seem very realistic. I'm even starting to hate everyone in the Weasley house except Percy

Oh my goodness.. poor Percy.

This is a wonderful story, it's so rare to find any fics that focus on Percy as a child. You've done a wonderful job with this.

I liked the chapter very much. To do Percy-character analysis is quite an interesting idea - and you handled it very well. Percy never was among my favourites, but your work definitely made me see him in a different light... Poor Percy...

I'm saying this for the first time other than when I finished DH. Poor, poor Percy! You really managed to sympathize with the main character and made me, the reader, feel exactly what he was feeling! Good work! I never thought that the twins could be so cruel... especially George.