That is lovely.

Such a bittersweet story. I like an outsiders pov on main characters, and I like how you wrote Sara and her relationship to Jack. I liked the part about "the elephant in the room".

Very good. I've always liked Sara O'Neill and wished that there were more mentions of her in canon or even fandom. Thank you.

Lovely story. You write Jack's emotions really well and I love how you wrote Sara. This seems like a very plausible situation, and I think it's exactly how they'd both react. Thanks for writing.

That was absolutely beautiful. Wonderful job.

This is a very good look at a part of Jack's life we rarely see much about. Good characterization of both, as well.

I saw this on stargateficrec

i like it. I like fic that doesn't turn sara into an evil witch. I love the adult nature of their breakup and the fact that they can still be friends.

thanks for this rare treat

This was such a well written story. Excellent.

Slam

Good. I like that you covered this aspect of Jack and Sara. It was done very well, tactfully, even beautifully handled.

"But now at last she realised there was nothing to be rebuilt. Only debris to be cleared out of the way." Now that is just a beautiful thought! Wonderful job.

In the first season of SG1, Jack appeared to still be very much in love with Sara. I have always enjoyed plausible stories that got them together (even if they would be AU, stories which I seldom read as I am a bit of a canon stickler). This was a wonderful story that doesn't violate known canon and has the potential of Jack and Sara having a future. Needless to say, I loved it. Thank you for the enjoyment I derived from the reading of this story. You write very well.

(Another type of story I really enjoy is a well done Jack-clone story. So I am off to praise another story of yours)

I've always been curious about a follow up for Sara & Jack (while at the same time rather grateful that the actual show's writers never chanced to come up with something stupid and awful). You did a marvelous job, least of all in your decision of what to paint in broad stroke and in fine detail.

One of my favorites (for reasons I can't quite explain) is when Jack's explaining his theory of how he got his second star.

I really enjoyed this. I needed to read stories about Jack in Washington and this hit the spot. I could feel his lonliness. You are very talented.

Love it :)

aw YAY that's nice! loved it!