Epsilon to Iacon has been the best chapter in a very well written story so far.

Epic story. I have been transfixed by this story the entire way. Not only have you made each individual come alive so splendidly and vividly, but your descriptions of settings, and the clarity, and fluidity of fight sequences are written with the skill of a seasoned author. I greatly look forward to the sequel, and hope in these later years, you have continued to write, you have a gift. Exceptional job, thank you for the adventure.

I laughed so hard! The last line is brilliant! Optimus and Elita to a T!

Omg omg omg I just ;_; THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL you have successfully made me a fan of optimus and elita! Love your ironhide and chromia too but the latter has more action *winkwink xD Looking foward to all your fics
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Holy scrap man, THIS IS GREAT! I'd like to se a sequel

Oh my gawd, that was amazing! Loved every bit of it! To the sequel!

Thanks for the Fic! :D

I assume this is where it all started. In that case, I must ask, did you ever see yourself taking this fan universe as far as you did?

Writing a sad story like this is not easy, but you managed it nicely. You also put the right amount of humor into it. Honestly, Ironhide and Chromia interfacing is easily the funniest thing I've read. And, while it was a shock at first, I think that the attack disrupting the party and cutting off aome of the goodbyes was a good touch. War is unpredictable. And, I like that brief glance at Skywarp and Thundercracker just before the attack. It reminds us that not every 'Con is as sparkless as one may believe...

While it doesn't quite fit any scene in the fic, I have to share this song, just because it fits the overall mood of the story and all of the couples in it: youtube watch?v 9MJHcDKHUbI

On to AWCT...

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Oops, I put the Skywarp/Thundercracker comment in the wrong chapter. I should've done a better job at skimming. I also forgot to mention I can see using Goldbug as a different bot altogether, considering he looks way different than Bumblebee. Sucks he had to die though. Anyway...

I wish I had the talent of writing that you have. I wish I can write fight scenes this good. I have said it before, and I will say it again: You are an awesome writer. You suck us into the story with vivid imagery and intense emotions, and we (or at least I) don't want to leave.

Btw, how's it going with your other two side-stories?

YAY SKYWARP AND THUNDERCRACKER! *Glomps unsuspecting Seekers* Thanks for putting them in.

I've seen quite a few fics where Bee is Optimus's creation. This way, where coming from the spark is a theory and experimented is a lot more believable than having the Allspark and spark-merging both able to create.

Haha, going up against them without knowing those two are the most trigger-happy Autobots out there. He was fraggin lucky! But he didn't get the information on time. Well, that makes great drama.

Tee Hee, he rambles too much. I'm wondering if maybe he didn't know and was sent on that mission because Starscream might've suspected something. Then again come to think of it, if he did, Starscream wouldn't given Counterpunch the Antivirus. Sly thinking of double-crossing them. Never once did they suspect Counterpunch, but Starscream. Guess he needs to treat his underlings with more respect so they don't automatically assume him.

Can you say Surprise Party?

And when the mech first showed up behind Frenzy, I instantly knew it was Soundwave, before his designation was said. (Then again, that might be pretty predictable). Sucks that Barricade can't say goodbye.

I really wish when my computer says I am logged in that I really am logged in, because I'd rather review on the comp, not my phone.

I love reading fanfics on my phone, I hate reviewing on my phone.

I read the exchange between Sideswipe, Wheeljack and Sunstreaker to my husband and he laughed. (we were lounging, reading fanfics on our phones, me this one and him a Harry Potter one).

btw, you'll get a few reviews in a row, I also read the next five chapters on my phone also. I'm reviewing with my thoughts when I first read the chapters.

:( Sad chapter, but yay! I'm done with this one! :D So...since Prowl and Jazz are gonna finally be sparkmates when he gets back, do you find a way around the whole issue with Jazz being torn in two? I sincerely hope so. I understand every old story could use revisions, but I still enjoyed all 17 chapters. :) Great job as always!

Condoms! They're all condoms, right? Totally kidding. Anyway...I decided since I'm over halfway through this thread now, I might as well review. It's nice to get more of the intimate relationships between some of the couples, and just to learn new things about a few characters. I can tell that this was one of the earlier things you wrote, but it's still enjoyable, and enjoy is what I've been doing.