Aw... Poor Severus... The last line really pulled on my heartstrings. Great job!

Owch. That gave me a real pang. Poor Snape. Very sweet, though.

This was nice too. I liked how the light-hearted start set the stage for this little slice of life view of their relationship. By the end I could feel the angst.

I really love this! I know what you mean about the whole playful "you know I love you" thing...it's said among friends at my school as well. I also love that Josh Groban song so it made the story even better. Write more Snape/Lily!

Aww!

So cute!

aw, it so cute!

Great job on your Severus/Lily one shot. It was really cute.

Somehow there's an irresistible attraction about making Snape's hair change colour...

As for the rest of the fic...*has been in this EXACT situation except without the Hogwarts* Naww, poor Sev. I do love their one-sided pairing. And this is rather sweet too. I think I'm going to have to download myself that song.

*on the verge of crying*

Awesome...

Very sweet! Thanks for sharing this little moment with us!

AW that is so cute.

But personally... I don't really like Snape. I like Lupin best P

I wonder if the reason why Snape doesn't like Potter is because Lily loves Potter in this story...

Hm.

:)

Update soon!