Haha, nice. This is a good fanfic, but is it actually written like tat? Either way it's funny.

steve darkl must overcome badd speeling adn gramur.

This make me smile.

What is this?

-man, use spellcheck. this isn't a text message, it's a damn story!

-Elvis couldn't have sex with joanna at all. elvis doesn't have a penis. look at him in PD for N64.

-And finally, don't write anything that's not entertaining.