Really fucking good with the imagery and repitition of the word 'devil' of extra intended effect

I enjoyed it :)

Ooooohhhhh! I loved this... especially when you constantly refered to Megatron as the devil...

xoxoxox

COol. I like the way you wrote this and how some parts of it were almost like a poem.

really REALLY well done!

Cool story.

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Wow! This is just amazing! The writing is incredibly good, and all the description and detail is perfect, especially in the last part. The idea of Megatron as the devil was really well done. And you conveyed Sam's fear and the chaos of the situation just right. I enjoyed it a lot :D

Whoa that had my adrenaline pumping! Just watching that scene makes me nervous. This was writtn so well, its made me even more jittery, lol.

"The devil was chasing him."

I never thought of it that way.

Bloody good fic : )

The best retelling of that scene that I have read.

That was nice.

Oh so beautiful. Lennox yelling at Sam with "You're a SOLDIER now!" brings "I'm a soldier, born to stand" and "We are soldiers, stand or die" of opening song "Rise" from "Ghost in the Shell - Stand Alone Complex 2nd GIG" to mind perfectly.

F'ing beautiful.

Hey, what about Mikaela when she's driving Bee and nearly has a break down in the alley?

Very nicely done.

Excellent action dialog, I particularly liked how you made the text fit in with actual lines in the movie. Bravo!

~Anonymous

Oh that was AMAZING! I especially loved the last line. I just saw the movie for the third time last night, and this fic fits so well into what Sam's mindset was during that scene. Awesome job!