I read this years ago and was happy to find it again while looking through my list of "favorites." I know it has been a while, but I hope you will one day come back and finish this unique, creative story!

Loved it! Wish there was an ending though. Lol

Omg! I know you haven't finished this story, and I'm one chapter away from finishing what you've done so far, and I'm already feeling sad at the loss. Though I've read you're A/N's and am aware of your personal loss and am very sorry to hear it. So I can't much blame you for your absence. But I really do hope you've continued your writing in some capacity since then. You're very talented.

Very well done. Definitely dark but, in the presence of naraku, it wouldn't be good if it wasn't.

Please let there be some action between kagome and sesshomaru before this thing ends. Please.

4 days with sesshomaru? No way! More like a week and a half to 2 weeks. Lolol! Anyways, I loved it. But I am hoping things get a little more lemony before this story comes to an end. Even I'm starting to feel bad for sesshomaru. Lollol

Awwweee! I like their interaction! Sesshomaru is finally learning that being a 'good boy' earns you more treats. Lol

LOVE the cliffhanger! Lolol! Oh sesshomaru... ha

Still loving it. Even though you'll likely never come back and finish it given all the years since, I'm still going to read on and enjoy. Though, if you ever care to, you wouldn't be the first to come back and finish many years later. If you wanted to...

It was a long one for sure! But so good. I love the character development. Especially between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Priceless! I do love it when Naraku and Sesshomaru fight over Kagome. Iknow you've mentioned that you feel your story is unoriginal. However, the thing I love about your story, what makes it truly unique, is less the plot and much moreso the character development and relational progression occurring between these characters. Your attention to detail is wonderful and precisely placed right where it should be. Your humor is ON POINT every time as well. I'm simply enjoying these interactions every second.

I just want to start by saying, I don't know who's flaming you but SCREW THEM. I flame people, ok? Not to be mean really, but when someone's writing is so frustrating threat I can no longer control my aggravation it happens. I could give you a thousand examples but who has time for that? No, I'm admittedly not perfect. But your writing damn near is. So anyone who is reaching that point of frustration with you, probably doesn't have the intellectual fortitude to handle reading the back of a cereal box. Much less a good story using 'big words' they probably don't understand. So, again, from an avid flamer (lol. just being real here) you don't deserve it. At all. There will always be people hating on talented people. It's a part of life. Ignore them. I tend to hate on idiots (much like Sesshomaru? Ha!), not the talented. You're great and I really hope you remember this one thing. I don't know why, but people who like stories don't typically comment on them. I myself have found myself buried in stories I loved so much that I didn't realize until I was nearing the end that I hadn't commented once. Iwas just so engrossed in their story. People are more likely to comment on the negative. It's just the way it is. So just remember...no matter what comments you're getting, the are a LOT more people out there who read it and loved it and probably forgot to comment much throughout the story. TRUST ME, YOU'RE A FANTASTIC WRITER!

I love every word. And frankly, I'm picky. You're ab amazing writer. I hope to read more of your works soon. After this one. Lol

"how in the world did he expect to keep a bitch in line if he couldn't even see through one's hoity parlor tricks?" I literally LOL'd at that! Your writing is magnificent. Consider me a fan.

Not well written? Are you kidding me? I LOVE IT! I was dying laughing at sesshomarus inner control freak and im really curious to see how this plays out. This was a great start.

I am guessing that, ten years later, it is probably far too much to hope that anything will ever happen with this story. I am sad because as much as it fits him, not many people write such a domineering Sesshomaru, at least not without some seriously questionable outcomes. Usually people write him as angsty Sesshomaru, or gentle Sesshomaru. Although my personal favorite is clingy Sesshomaru, though only one author has managed that well and she has never finished her story either. Sigh.. But domineering Sesshomaru is pretty entertaining. He creates a lot of amusing conflict. Thank you for writing what you did, and maybe one day some more inspiration will strike. I do wonder where your writing skills are at now since most authors tend to evolve over time...