Reviews for On the First Day of Christmas
Nix Whispen chapter 9 . 1/16/2013
Some of your readers are American and the songs are all Chinese and or japenese that aren't the 12 days of christmas
A Midsummer Night's Dream chapter 9 . 9/5/2010
I personally like the first two ones, the ones with the Taicho's andtheir zanpaktou. XD
Vinyali chapter 2 . 2/8/2009
Clever! Especially the sneezing part.
fanfictionusername chapter 2 . 6/5/2008
ooh another hitsugaya fan~ Hitsugaya rocks! great job
kuushion chapter 7 . 12/28/2007
hurry up!
LoliBat chapter 6 . 12/24/2007
xD amusing,nonetheless
Iris Serinium chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
I thought this was a cute idea, and it has lots of potential to be a very good story though as I read all the carols, I found it didn't turn out as good as I thought it would. From your other works, it seems like you're a good writer, but this was just a few bad choices. I think the carols could have been better, but you should have written in what was happening while they were singing and tried to work on the repeating thing. You know what I mean? I promise I'm not trying to be mean, quite sorry if it sounds that way, I just think this story could be better. Lots of love, poppet!

-Iris Serinium
xZeroxKira chapter 5 . 12/14/2007
ARGG! change something of something... that's just too similar or something... you just replaced some words or something...
kinichi chapter 5 . 10/25/2007
YA hitsugaya ROCKS! ( bo hinamori, yay matsumoto)
RadicalEd57 chapter 5 . 10/25/2007
Why dun you try something different, hon? It got old fast.
Conterra-san chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
that was like an acid trip

but amusing.

~C
DemonicXaliv chapter 2 . 8/24/2007
Cute, though I think the count is wrong cause you said on the last one Zaraki beat up a person for the secound, but it's the thrid so if you do something like this in the secound one try and keep track a little better is all.
Otawan chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
I did something like this a little while ago...Hope your not stealing ideas, 'ne? Ah I don't really care it's a free country do what you want, and I'll look forward to reading. (If you 13 you can have all divisions.)