I'd prefer the dragon to the dance

It is wonderful.

In the beginning, Cho giggled a lot. I was like- WTF?!

you say blush a little too many times laws

Good

And when Hermione defecates, catch it and eat it.

Dear Mr. Akiyama,

I have just recently (yesterday) discovered you and your brilliant stories. I loved this story ad how you depicted characters, especially Cho and Sirius. If it doesn't cause you too much stress, I strongly urge you to resume the writing of this story.

I enjoyed Blaise shutting Draco down. I thought that was awesome. Blaise is one of my favorites so I like when he's written as a darker good guy

Now hold on I know this fic is practically dead. But if you're shipping Sirius with Hedwig then I swear this is the weirdest fic I've read from the start of this year.

Oh my side is hurting.

I love this side of cho the way she told off Marietta like that damn I wish she was this in the Canon she could have ended up with Harry.

No offence
but have you read the book or only seen the movie
coz there are some things you have mentioned that are from the movie and not the book
anyway good story

awesome fanfic
nice story

If the reader got a dollar each time giggling was mentioned this fic would make you rich.

Oh poor Padfoot at least they're not shaving your initials into your hair

Aww, I loved your story, it was great! I wish you'd continue this one, it started out so well and now it's ending and perfectly too! Well, please update it soon!