LMAO well done.

This was alarming but also hilarious, thanks for writing!

hahahahahaha...
I think my favorite part is the end with Hidan, Tobi, Deidara and Zetsu. XD
That was some laughs I needed.
Loved it.
Well done.

I love this. It really hits on most of the major flaws of smut. Thanks for the laugh.

"If this goes on there'll be a sequel, and no one wants that."

Oh really, Kisame? I think there are more than enough of us out there who like parodies of smut, and would like nothing more than to laugh our collective rug-burned bottoms off to a second chapter. Consider this story favourited.

This was the funniest thing I've read in ages. Thank you!

This was brilliant! Oh my god I absolutely loved this story. From the moment I read Midwestern Virgin I knew I had gotten myself into something unpredictable. Im a Midwestern Virgin by the way lol.

Very nice job!

I see you've taken A and P as well.

I fucking laughed the whole thing. Wait, that made no sense. IT WAS FUCKING FANTASTIC OKAY. I'm favoriting it, regardless of the shame I may or may not endure because it has a 'lemon'. It's like.. trollolol. Satire. I love it.

Seriously one of the best crackfics ever. What were you smoking? Lol sooo funny I was laughing so hard!

So... So...

SO HILARIOUS 3

I laughed /so/ hard.

Kisame, that love-tunnel-assaulting fish...

I definitely have to say this is one of my favorite stories. Ever.

The crack within it just... TAKES THE CAKE.

OMG funniest effin thing I have ever read!

"for the love of Gaara's tattoo."

fuckin genius!

Okay, I know this is old and all, but I laughed so hard I cried. Thank you.

I laughed hysterically through this entire story. xD

This is pure WIN 3