| Reviews for Alter Our Hearts |
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   F Maurice chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 Good - I'm glad it was only one year that Hermione wasted. Good for Ron for saying what he thought. And he was right - Hermione wouldn't have listened to him early in her supposed relationship with Kevin. |
| layla chapter 1 . 2/3/2011 omg i love this story! its rly good and ur such a great writer!:) |
| N. E. Won chapter 1 . 1/10/2011 Aww I really liked it. Wait...there's a second chapter? See ya! |
| Sugarplumjellygum chapter 1 . 8/24/2010 OMG, I loved that! |
| emily chapter 1 . 7/12/2010 i love this. we all know that ron and hermione were meant to be together :) i loved the definition of ron at the top |
| TeamPapaya chapter 1 . 4/4/2010 really good |
| Billybob - csagun36 chapter 1 . 12/19/2009 very good, I enjoyed evry word |
| cara.seismic chapter 2 . 11/14/2009 so very adorable! i loved it! :) |
| thisisaninactiveaccount1234567 chapter 1 . 10/27/2009 oh this is so cute! like, the best thing ever! that sounded really stupid...but i love it! excellent job. |
| ilo6409 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009 i think your characterization was spot on! great story! Cheers |
| witchbitch930 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009 This is brilliant. I loved stories with plots like this, and i have to say that yours is one of the better ones that I've read. Great job, and please keep writing. :) |
| Alquimista chapter 1 . 7/22/2009 Great fic, but I dont like it!... It's a virus or what? now all the fics are about Hermione with others men while Ron is waiting like a lapdog!... sorry!, your fic is good, (well written and good dialogs) this is not only abut your fic... The first part (the break-up) is good, but the second... I don't know, but for me, It would be a lot better if when Hermione goes to Ron, He was in bed with some chick (like Charlie)... this way Ron wouldn't be too a big... loser?... It seems this is write from the POV of Hermione, so it's wonderful for her! but what about Ron?... The way it is now, Ron is a bit pathetic, waiting faithfully for Hermione while she is with other man? He was no pride? no needs? no temptations?... He is a man who knows the 'love of his life' is with other man! I'm a little worried about all this fics... It seems that now, for the young women, the only way for a man to show his love is through submission?... Now, love is about humiliation, control, or/and submission?... and in the ending : “I promise to never let you go again,”... is not Hermione who must say something like this? She was the one to be in another relationship! It reminds me the typical faithful submissive wife waiting in home for her cheating husband... but with the roles reversed. I don't know... |
| MaNdErS20100 chapter 1 . 7/21/2009 Great one-shot! _ |
| a person chapter 2 . 7/21/2009 cool |
| Smartie6 chapter 2 . 7/21/2009 Absolutely brilliant! I loved this story :) Keep up the great work |
