Ooohhh that was so good!:) I really hope you write more stories because you're a very good writer!

Another chapter? or 2? I was really sad when it ended, and I want to read more... so yeah, I loved it!

Nicely done. I would have MUCH rather seen that section of the book from Ron's eyes, him and Hermione are just too cute :)

Loved it :-D

Hope To God that scene makes it into the film, its such an amazing moment for Hermionie's character - what a DUDE!

Jess

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WFT! did you know we're only alowed to send 30 messages a day? that's so fucking stupid!

gah... in response to your PM:

that too. ;)

i'll talk to you tomorrow, hun. sleep tight!

I LOVED IT! I really liked how you ended it with Dobby. That was nice. Even though he wasn't very close to Dobby, I loved how his death touched Ron so much. This whole story gave me a new respect to Ron.

It was SO sweet when Ron was talking about how brave Harry was! I know this story was all about Hermione and Ron's relationship, but that Harry and Ron moment was my favorite part! Thanks for putting it in there. And THANK YOU for giving Ron a bit of sense of perspective. Most love stories I read about, the narrator's world revolves around their lover so much that they would whisk everything else away, but you didn't do that. You kept Ron's great character and you made him see other things happening and act appropraitely. Again, I commend you for writing a unique story, taking one of Jk's scenes and having it from soeone else's perspective. I might just do one myself, but with a different scene, of course.

Thanks for this amazing read!

he, I laughed when Ron said, "I've always like Dean." It's like that comment defined Dean, I don't know. I just thought it was really funny.

That was a sweet chapter. You should be proud of it.

Sorry, I just thought it was really funny, in a good way. It's so like Ron to make a blanket statement like that.

Great chapter!

That's better, when Ron reflects on the fact that he forgot aout Dobby. Thanks for remembering to address that!

Even though this was a short chapter, it was funny!

hehe, "not intended for male eyes".

Aww, I'm about to cry!

That was sweet and all about Ron's determination to save Hermione, but I didn't like how he just decided to forget about Dobby.

I am loving this!

That was nice how Harry and Ron worked together, and the comment about Scabbers not killing Harry was sweet.

That part about missing Kreacher was really random though. Not quite sure where that came from...

oh no! Poor Ron!

This was written brilliantly! I love it! Ron is in perfect character! This was a good scene to write about!

love it!

aww i loved that!

you should write about the part where they're at Hogwarts and he tells Hermione they should free all the kitchen elfs, and she kisses him. and the part when Fred dies (T.T) so sad! and when they think harry died,(they fight) and when they all go up to the griffendor tower cause harry is tired

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hi

I love it

awesome ,really!

so please update very soon and keep it up

bye

wasu

ps. brilliant work,really!

I think this is the best chapter you've written so far! You're getting good at detailing the specific emotions of your characters!