Too bad we'll never see the ending. Really good though, like 9 or 9.5/10 for me

Awesome story please don't abondon it!

This nigga got all the Bijuu done fucked

The five tails is a dolphin horse called kokuo that controls steam

This was a great read, and my heart started breaking the moment they left for Konoha. Almost couldn't read on because I was swept into the idyllic life the bijuu built for themselves and hoping that somehow some of that happiness would be preserved. Then things started going up in flames. Still, your writing is gripping and I hope you know how much enjoyment you've brought to people even ten years down the road. Cheers.

This is one of those unfinished masterpieces. I guess real life took over (darn reality).
Amazing. I'm glad I stumbled onto this story.

Your image of a biju turned loose isn't the boss battle they often resorted to in the cartoons. Yours really was a force of nature unleashed, the description terrible yet almost majestic.
And then you returned to the human aspect, tired and injured young people, with Naruto noticing how young some of the enemy troops were.
You're really very a skilled writer.

This chapter brought me to tears.
You include quotations you've used or been inspired by in every chapter. Do you look for them in advance and build the chapter to use them, or do you write, then rewrite when you recall a phrase that fits?

Tsunade thinking of that earlier betrayal of jinchuriki as a necessary evil, calling them sociopaths in her thoughts and apparently believing that they should come and fight for Konoha without having terms of their own shows just how these people are viewed.
Jinchuriki really are considered weapons, aren't they? These are shinobi. They have every right and reason to negotiate to their own advantage (which to me would involve every record in every village mentioning their home being destroyed. Not one village has treated jinchuriki well enough for them to want to live there).

Sorry I didn't comment as I read the first half. This is fascinating, in many ways more intriguing than the canon story as it really utilizes the jinchuriki and the hatred that is so universal for them. This group of broken people deserves a future of peace. The question is, how will they manage when the outside world bothers them again?

OK. I cried when katashi died and that hurt my heart but reading this chapter broke it. I had to take a break towards the end to stop crying and when I finish the chapter I broke into tears again because I was waiting for noboru's reactiona and it hurt. you are a great author. please update

I thought this was gonna be happy. It's not. Katashi died. Riko is preparing to die. Gaara covinced Kankuro to kill their sister. Fuck. I thought this was gonna be a 'starts tough but everthing gets better' but it's a 'starts tough and only get worse from there' story.

That being said it's good. Really good. Just not sure if I want to endure through watching them suffer. And die.

I actually have a profile but for some reason I can't log in anymore. Like it's logs me in and I can update my stories and see if I have any messages but it then also immediately logs me back out so I can't favorite or follow stories anymore.

I know it has been forever but incase life finds you back here one day I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this.

This story is Amazing! It was well written and I admired the detail, characterisation and plot. I quickly got attached to the non-canon jinchuuriki, they were wonderful to read about. Fascinating, absolutely fascinating. Though this is old and likely abandoned, it was great and it would've been great to see more. So much potential! (Still, your choices must be respected)

Yugito kakashi stress relief ughhh, but otherwise phew FKING sad especially Katashi dying