This was pretty good, i like how you made it a mix of cannon and your own story. ;)

That was fuckin' awesome!

*cries* that was beautiful. So stirring

Nice! I loved it! Awesome job!

-d101

Haha, I'm going to review my own fanfiction because I'm such a nerd/loser.

Plus, I got sick of having 13 reviews. 13's an unlucky number.

So... keep up the good work? Yeah...

wow.. that was breath taking...your a really good writer.- it was one of the best fanficts ever! i hope you continuing with your work.o and have a happy holiday!

That was BEAUTIFUL. I love this pairing, and you certainly did them justice. :)

Aww. Had me going for a while there. Teared up a bit, too.

Good job. :]

Wow that was truly beautiful. Really amazing writing with this. And I thought that ending was really cute. Great job!

~Nari

"She never would have forgotten the date. Like her name, and like his name, the date had been etched permanently on the inside of her skull." I adore that line. There were a few others I really loved too. This fic was written very well, and was easy to read. Not to mention it was super cute. Into my favs it goes. -favs-

uhm.. sorry,, but i think it was a little bland.. could have been better.. anyway, i like that it was keiko's point view...

Now that I've finished reading it beautiful is the only word that comes to my mind. I believe you did an excellent job with Keiko especially. That was a very enjoyable read, five stars all the way! D

girl this was so good i gotta slap you! you better make another version!

Hallo my friend. I didn't review because I never got a Story Alert from Fanfiction's Bot. -.- Suprise, suprise.

But I really love this story.

*Sighs* Your story makes me want to write more poems...Which I will. So I'll ttyl, 'kay? :}

Keep up the awesome stories.

~Armed'n'Strangerous

PURE AWESOMENESS! Your a genius! This is one of the best ones. _