... What happened? Who bombed? Huh? Please explain! This is good though. *faved*

...I wonder what's going on... That would be horrible... I was almost crying myself by the end...

Poor Akira, and everyone...

Well written.

Such a cute story you wrote! It'd be great if you make this into a series. But a one-shot is fine too. Thank you very much.

I wonder why you did not updated this story?It has a good start anyway,I hope you can be inspired and updated has a diferent format than other up your good work

wah, i like it, i wish there were more. I'd like to know what happens next... and maybe what's causing this appocolis type situation, sounds like war to me. but people do pritty mad stuff in blackouts too. *pouts* i want more *whines pathetically*

come on! crying touya! my heart aches for him *sniffles*

That, I must say, was very intriguing. I love the plot, although I'm not entirely sure what it is yet. It sounds fresh, and the idea looks promising. Please do continue on.

The ending was so touching... Poor Touya. Now please fill the story out, add some background information and stuff... I hope you will update soon.

Great job!

Oh wow. This is just so powerful. I seriously have tears in my eyes. I think maybe this affects me so much because I lost my brother, so I can identify so well with Akira's pain, but watching the kids gather together and do their best to take care of each other is almost equally moving. This is painfully beautiful. Thank you so much for writing something so wonderful.

Very interesting plotline! Can't wait to read the next part!

Very nice. Very sad. Good job.