Yeah your right kakashi I mean he let the most intrained genin team in the chunin exam.
While the rest of the rookies where at the very least organized.
What incompentent teacher shoves a group of untrained, under skilled, unorganized team of kids in to a death match.
Even his reputation is questionable i mean he never won any ninja above his own level.
His worst stundent (so he claims), Naruto took on neji and gaara (which even he will have trouble against) on the same day.

Lots of potential

this should not be marked complete but since it is the adoption notice should be in the summery or first chapter

It's a shame the story was abandoned.

I have to agree about Kakashi being a crappy teacher, playing favorites and unable to bring out Naruto's potential.
I didn't notice a MONTH needed for Naruto to learn Rasengan, but I agree that it's oblivous hint at Kakashi's failures as a teacher.

I agree about the arthur's note agaisnt Kakashi... with out all the langauge, but you are correct.

Okay, I'm not a big fan (hell, i just don't like it at all) of NaruTen. But that one comment "Discontinued... how unyouthful" had me pissing my pants laughing.

Great story! I like 3 points: 1. good idea 2. a good writing style 3. next to zero mistake (didn't see any but we are all human last time i check) and Bonus point: you agree that kakashi teach like [searing in progress] and don't give a damn about Naruto.

TALK

U RANT

WE U

IF U HAVENT WELL SWCREW U HE HAS A MORE TROUBLE TO DEAL WITH HE HAS A CURSE WITH HE DEALT WITH ALL HIS LIFE SO AND YOUR PRESCIOUS

EMO BIGOTED GAY OF A SON OF FAGUKU ONIRAH HARUNO) NOT ITACHI/MIKOTO WHO JUST WOULD PUT MUCH PUSSY ON THE LINE FOR POTENTIAL A PRODIGY ?

HE HAS THE BLOOD LINE SO BIG WUPPY DODA. YOU HAVE NARUTO NO BLOOD LINE AND A CLAN ! HE DOES THE NAMIKAZE AND UZUMAKI

GREAT CLAN NARUTO

LOSER CLAN SAS-UKE EUCHIFAG

PS U SUCK D BURN THIS NO POST THIS PLEASE

pSS YOU DID THIS WITH THE RANT BUT

err you do realise tat tenten is 1 year older than naruto right

This is a god story and im happy to find that another person sees the excellence of Naruto X TenTen

this is great.

though i do think you where a bit harsh on kakashi

Can't you just continue the story and not have it as a NaruTen? Because I really want to see what happens next. And how Gai teaches Naruto...

This is new. I've never Seen a Naruto-on-Team-Gai fic before. I really want to see where you take this.

I look forward to more interesting works from you.

1) I like Gai's arguments for training Naruto himself.

2) Everything you said about Kakashi is correct, he is a horrible teacher (I'm pretty sure that Team 7 is the first set of genin that that Kakashi hasa ever trained).

3) When Lee is leaving Gai cries 'crocodile tears?' Just to make sure, but usually when someone says someone is crying crocodile tears it means fake tears.

P.S. I think Gai would have made a wonderful teacher for Naruto if something like this had happened in the series, but he does tend to freak Naruto out.