yusuke is an uke.

Well, actually this isn't really lemon.

lemon is the actuall sex and you "censored" it. p

Anyway, it was good lime (actaully i'm not positive what lime is, but whatever...)

It was good almost-lemon!

This is awesome! One of the best stories I've ever read, and definately the best lemon.

yum

So cute! You really caught their character in this first chapter. As for censored...no comment. But I love it! That was exactly how Jin talked an everything! I can talk like Jin but I can never write down his accent, or any accent for that matter. I'll sit there staring at the computer for a few minutes before I actually start typing the darned thing out. You got a gift! You should really consider becoming an author!

Nice, I really didn't like Keiko anyways

Hey, I like it. I like the re-write too, as it is very well...described. I like how in the first chapter you edit it all out. It sets a mood and then lets your mind go rampant. I like the way you write...please make another one...or add another chapter.

*clap clap clap clap clap* that was a wonderful lemon, I'm sorry if I forced it on u though... but that was wonderful. thos surprizingly awsome couple ne? that was great, by the way, totally exelent...figures jin's ears are sensitive though right lol XXD again great job.

CENSORED! Y the hell did u censore it! REALLY! If ur going to show those sexy demons sucking each other nipples, getting naked, and rub themselfs against each other, Y can't u show them make love?