poor gosalyn, but being an older sibling myself I can somewhat sympathize with how she feels, when my brother was younger, I was proud and all of that and made the vow of protecting him if the need should ever come, as he has aged, it has become more of a strained relationship, many times since his birth I have "offered" to show him how to "play" a game I call farmer and chicken (if you catch my meaning) or make references to mallets, arsenic, cyanide, etc. Despite this I still acknowledge the fact that if we were out together, and somebody did him harm (obvious accidents being the exception) they would have to answer to me. I hope that you continue this story, as it would be interesting to see if Gosalyn gets over her frustrations or not, do they form a bond, does Gosalyn run away? curious minds want to know (quick apology for cheesy interviewer reference).

What a sad ending... (state the obvious much?)

Still, at least you left a bit of hope with that heart-to-heart conversation Gosalyn wants to have. If they ever get around to having it...

Ha-HA! I knew I'd find you on here! Anywho, down to business: my review!

This is a really good piece of work. I like the way you've looked at a possible expansion of the Mallard family, and Gosalyn's feelings about the whole situation. I imagine it would be hard to go from being the only daughter of a single father to a family of four (especially considering she's adopted, and of an older age). I like how you keep everyone seeming like themselves, despite the seriousness of this piece and the general silliness of the show itself. The ending is pretty sad, but we all know that it'll work out in the end...right? RIGHT? D:

You did a great job. Kudos to you! Now I'm off to see what else you've written.

The alliteration made me smile.

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO PUT CHAPTER 2 UP BECAUSE I WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN TO GOSALYN THANKS

Aw, poor Gos! I really wish for a happy ending, but that's only because you wrote the sad one so well. Awesome work—oh yeah, and nice pic of the Fearsome Five on DeviantART.

That is so sad. I think you should add another chapter to have Gosalyn patch things up with her dad.

Aww, that was a beautiful story there CommanderD! I really and thoroughly enjoyed that!

The story does bring up an excellent point about what would happen if Darkwing Duck did marry and had children of his own "flesh and blood." After Gosalyn has pretty much lived with Drake for a few years and she has his undivided attention and love, she would feel quite jealous about Drake marrying and having children. Not to mention all the insecurities she would feel because as the story brought out, Erica is his baby and Gosalyn was adopted. That's where Drake should take the time to comfort and let Gosalyn know that no matter what (NO Matter What! Song by Badfinger! My Goodness!) she will always be Darkwing's number one girl, Day After Day! (Another Bad Finger Song! Day After Day! Like Babs Bunny, Sometimes I just can't help myself *rofl* *rofl* *rofl* *rofl* *rofl*

You know a lot about Darkwing Duck and his relationship with Gosalyn! Great job!

when are you going to put chapter 2 up because i want to know whats going to happen to gosalyn

this is really, really, quite sad. Even I'm near tears. I would like to see what this could come out off. 1 of my favortie stories ever. period.

So, Gosalyn's feeling alienated now that Drake's got a family of his own. This lack of attention from her dad must be brutal on her. At least she has 1 person left to turn to. Her neighbour & her best friend, Honker Muddlefoot. Perhaps with Drake & Morgana devoting so much time to Erica, Gosalyn can spend more time aroud Honker, granted Honker didn't get in trouble because Gosalyn spent so much time batting with him. Either way, Honker may see more of Gosalyn now that Erica is around, do you think so? Well, anyway, update soon.

You're not going to continue this one? This is so emotionally true to the feelings that children often get. Very nice work. It's very sad that Gosalyn feels that she is an outsider in her own family. I can only hope that a talk with her father and Morgana would help her to feel better, if not them then time would help her adjust. Once again very awesome, and sad, one-shot.

Heide

Aww... Poor Gosalyn... I like this though. It's nice (well not really) to have something other than fluff around. Espescially one with DW and Morgana married.

I like it, I hope you write more for this.

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