Wow it was such as beautiful story. Got me crying at the end. Thank you ️

I mean it was pretty bold when he stormed the Jedi temple when it still had Jedi masters in it...

To be honest all organs would have to do is put a blaster shot into Vader’s control panel to disable it

Did you ever read the comic about Vaders Doctors assistant? She was like madly in love with him and he didn't know she existed. Your Doctor character reminds of her. But your character isn't as delusional. She had all these crazy fantasies about Vader. It's really off the wall but it is a good read.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

This was breathtaking. I'm glad I read it.:3

Poor Andrew...

Tarkin has some authority, but thats not the same as being powerful

IT'S A TRAP!

Well sometimes older is better because with age comes experience

Beautiful! This should have been the ending

I feel for bad for (I think I spelled that wrong)

This was quite the journey truly an amazing story that i wish was somehow canon the characters development was also very good from the beginning right down to the end of anakin finally accepting himself while i would of liked to have read more about anakins and padmé’s fourth child I understand that 130 chapters is a lot to write in the time you did having leia marry han was also a great idea anyway this story was really good and I enjoyed reading it.

She played with fire but i can't not for thek

Star Wars, where you can clone an entire army, but apparently a single kidney would be too much to ask for.