That was the best chapter yet! I loved it. The way you discribed the sequence of events, and everyone pulling together and praying for her, also how you expressed Jill's emotions was perfectly written, Super job! So now Jill has become the Goddess I wonder what's next for her? You leave us with Karen praying for Rick at the Goddess pond. Oh, I hate cliffhangers! Next chapter please.

Wait, That's it? You tell us it's the end, but there's a cliffy!

wtf... WTF!

:*(

Great Chapter. Well written. Update soon!

-Fennecfox03

omg. Woah. I still continue to ever so love your writing style. I know this is cliche, but all of your words flow, and link, and the descriptions are so graphic and beautiful and GRR! I loved reading about Jill's transformation! It was so sweet, yet... nostaglic, if you know what I mean.

I really wonder what in the world happened to Gray though... poor guy.

And... gasp. There's the guy Jill was talking about! (Yeah, I'm gonna keep calling her Jill, I dunno why, lol.)

Hope you update soon... this story rocks my sunglasses O.O

Holy... POO. I'm serious, this story is frickin awesome, amazing, great, wonderful, all those things... I hate myself for not reading it earlier. I love how you portray everyone. And the plot is... like, the best plot ever. I'm serious. I'd never think up Jill being the next goddess, and having a Talec and everything in a million years. You deserve a LOT more praise for a story like this, and... wow. I love how everything is connected, and the angst you put in Jill's description, and just... everything. I love every single frickin character.

I LOVE YOU O.O

Two words: Hell yay.

Why didn't I read this friggin earlier? I am so staying up to read the rest of the chapters...

Uh oh, whats about to happen? Argh, evil cliffhanger!

This chapter was well worth the wait. You are doing a very good job of building the suspence and making your readers want more! So what does Popuri know? Just that Jill is destined to become the Goddess, or is there more to it? And what's up with Gray? Things that happen on cold moonless nights arn't usually good! I'm psyched about what's coming up and look forward to reading the next chapter real soon. Cya then!

Hey, great chapter, ya I'm over now... SUPER VITAMIN-C PILLS, UNITE! I'll have to get back to you about re-reading the fic. In the mean time, Deathly Hallows has me by the eyeballs and I've only escaped it... NO! I don't wanna read you... No... I want to read... Goddess. EEP! Help! My eyes! they burn!

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Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one!

-Fennecfox03

Nice job with this chapter! Thanks for the explanation about the formatting in the Goddess section. It makes sense now since I understand the effect you were trying to create. Your story continues to be well written and nicely detailed, good job! It's getting quite intriguing now, what's going to happen to Jill next, and how will it involve Ann? I guess I'll find out in a week or so. Cya then!

Ok, thank you for understanding. by the way I give this chapter 3/5. (New rating system I developed, can't talk about, ancient chinese secret. :P )

Yep, I liked this chapter too! You did a good job with advancing the plot and things are really starting to get interesting. I was a bit confused by the way the section with the Goddess in her pond was formatted. Was it supposed to be all spread out like that? Other than that I really enjoyed reading this, and I look forward to seeing whats going to happen next.

Aw, poor Jill. This is turning into a really good story, keep up the good work!

-Fennecfox03

In response, I'm sorry to have prematurely reviewed, I have a slight cold and it's messing with me ability to read. Today I was well enough to read this chapter and notice that you seem to flip back and forth between Some guy and his girlfriend and the main story. Anyways you need to put more effort into details. I will reread the fic and review when you have your next chapter up.

Again, sorry for coming out of the blue like that -Pause

I've (attempted) to read all your current chapters. But for some reason it's just hard to read... Improvement needed.