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omg that was so sad...
well i didn't cry but my heart just hurts...
u should do a sequel to this.. like from sasuke pov or smth...
but u did an awesome job with this story

I haven't cried in a long time over a story, but this one just takes the cake. Man, I was crying like a baby. Just got me right in the heart. Whoo. I really appreciate you writing this. Thanks.

sad...

Oh my..just wow...this was so sad it almost made me cry. The feelings seem so true and everything is set perfectly. I can feel the pain of Sasuke wen he actually kills naru. Imma go read ur other stories!

This was so good. I loved the sadness here, and the possibility of Naruto giving up- he really was broken for a bit after the valley fight, and even though he always bounces back there is always a possibility that he wouldn't- it's a great explanation here. And I loved how you described Naruto's slow death too- it seems like everything was resolved right there, in a tragic way. I can definitely tell that Sasuke, even if he was broken before, can't be fixed now.

Oh my god, I'm sobbing as I read this. I actually am a little worried that my laptop my short out; after all, my tears are falling onto the keyboard. I haven't cried in SADNESS from a story in almost a year. I've cried in happiness and relief, but this...it's different. I love this story, and oh god, is it sad. I love it, and how at the very end (of naruto's life, not of the story) how Sasuke reasponded. Writing this review is making me cry more. I love this story so much TTTT

You made cry. I wish you would continue so it doesn't end in tragedy.

I must admit, I like your writing style very much. And I truly loved the way you wrote this one. If you still have the storyline and the time to add one more chapter, that would be wonderful. If not, this is great just the way it is. I thank you deeply for posting it.

yeah... you can't really add more if the main character is dead... and why mess with perfection?

i really liked it

...i tried looking up the song but that didnt work out

though eariler i found that "unaffected" by hoobastank worked amazingly well with ur story!_!

-sniff- Man..that was really good. Very emotional, extremely sad. Nicely done.

the song a long long time ago from pan's labyrinth goes with this story too

ah...Im crying. This is so sad. Damn you write good! Damn this is sad...ah Fuck!