So cute and so much fluff.
I like the kissing scenes the most.(obviously)
Ryoma a man of few words.-

Omg so sweet!

Nanjiro you idiot. And yes, Ryoma, I didn't know until the mangaka practically slapped me with a real honest to god date in Shin Tennis no Ouji-sama. But yes, ecchi Ryoma is normal in doujins and fanfictions.

they ARE pathetic and wow so terribly bad at expressing their feelings verbally. . . BUT god i love them too much because of it? like they're practically on other sides of the spectrum but manage to always attract each other no matter how EUGH they are with mushy things oh man im done nice overall writing and flow!

I loved this! Jealous ryoma is a cute ryoma. Answering 'no' to those guys in behalf of Sakuno was very sweet and adorable.. Was it? Hehe.. I was all giddy. Yey... Love RyoSaku a lot!

This was cool!
Love it!
Ryoma's so cool tripping the boy with . Haha. Bad but cool!
And that passing to her thru his mouth.. Waaaaaah! Awesome

AWWW love it! 3

Very very awesome! Write another one!

He kissed her with half of Japan watching.

Oh, if this would only come true in the anime.

love how u don't really show that Ryoma's jealous. And TONS of boys wants Sakuno.

1 of the best storys i've ever read simply amazing

Wow, the first time I read this, it was about two years ago . I loved this fic back then, and I still do . I don't know how to explain, but this fic is like, absolutely IN character . There's no other way to put it . But I didn't really get the part when you said "How many times did he put his hand underneath her shirt, pressing her taunt body against his, before she'd slapped him and say the same thing?" . Are you implying that Ryoma actually did that? Because I don't think he would . But nonetheless, I loved this story, a great read .

Good job . :)

SQUIRMY BUG YOUR FUNNY HEHE

i seem to be a sucker for some cheesy stories sorry hehe

Good story. The part with the Ponta was so cute!

Oh, Ryoma, Ryoma, Ryoma. I'm not so sure how I should respond to his behavior-it's startlingly caveman-esque, and Sakuno's wobbly character usually makes my feminist wiles rage-but this was an enjoyable read nonetheless. They're both so teenage it hurts.

One point of confusion. This sentence: "How many times did he put his hand underneath her shirt, pressing her taunt body against his, before she'd slapped him and say the same thing?" There's some tense disagreement. You say either "she had slapped him and SAID the same thing," which would imply that the boy had been continually harassing her and this kiss just took it too far; or, "she WOULD slap him and say the same thing," which would mean that the boy routinely got hit by Sakuno for his lechery.

Otherwise, your fic was a very enjoyable read-you made me even enjoy knuckle-dragging caveman behavior (but hey, since it's Ryoma, I suppose it's alright; he get's away with being an arrogant ass, after all, and people-like me, paradoxically enough-love him to bits for it). Hee.