Beautifully done. I think that somewhere in the books it says Brom is Eragon's father... I don't know, I'll have to go back and reread them. Anyways, good job!
Queenie

Please keep on writeing.I love the on writeing

U are so right brom is his dad oh my god I could not believe it whe I read that part I was yes i KNEW IT i always wondered why Brom stayed in Carvahall, was it just to hide or something else? Its easy to see that brom really cared fro him. Its so sad that Brom died though. Write another one soon I was really moved by it.

I loved it, please make more chapters to the story

~Violetclaw

I liked the desperation of this. I also like the difference between the two brothers' conceptions. Murtagh came from rape and Eragon from love. It's definitely interesting.

I believe it too! You write beautifully.

~Chip

Great story! You should totally right a sequel! But, it's just a suggestion! Great story once again!

- RileyGurl

aww cute

aww. how cute. poor selena. i feel bad for her. this was a great story.

That was well writen and I enjoyed it alot.

Wow. You do a great job on these fanfics. Sadly I haven't read the books or seen the movies, but I have felt like I've gotten to know Selena by your fanfics. Are you going to write other fanfics? Thanks for sending me the e-mail with your fanfic. I feel like a special friend because you send me your fanfic to read and review. Talk to you soon!

You've done it again! It was really good. I can actually imagine Selena's stories being part of the books. Good job. & keep it up.

In eldest, Murtagh revealed him and eragon are brothers, same parents. But nevertheless, superb, poor Selena, she could never catch a break?