TASTY! The sweetest evah! Love it oh so much!

You did very well in this story, and by the way if I remember correctly from studies...In the Japanese culture (that or anywhere for the matter) two people sharing an umbrella is a symbol of Romance or something like that.

AW! thats all i can say..._ BEAUTIFUL fic and tottaly in-character D!

Love it.

Nice job on this oneshot! Very happy that you kept them in character (I'm still struggling to do that in my story .

I liked the "What does rain remind you of" idea, but the fic wasn't very deep, or at least as deep as you'd expect I guess. It was a little unsatisfying, but still a good fic, maybe you can do something to it to give it a little more depth.

I remember seeing one or two spelling errors, one was in the first or second sentence if you want to edit it, otherwise, nice job. :3

Besides a few typos here and there, I think this was very good for your first fanfic. _ You managed to keep them in character...the way I couldn't when I wrote my first Royai fic XD

*bows*

Ah, I love the ending. XD Haha, useless.

good job. that was really your first one? Unbelievable!

That was very well-written. the sudden change in Hawkeye's mood was really good. haha.. You did well in the figures of speech. You did a really great job!

Erinn~

OMG. totally awesome story! Im looking forward to more! Keep it up! seriously! :D REALLY COOL.