What were you trying to do? Give me a heart attack? You made my heart swell. Thank you, this is beautiful.

OMG. I loved the repetition of "Hey Hiei" throughout the story. It was so touching. And I wanted to cry so many times. Great great fantastic amazing work.

-Lyn

I have no words with which to adequately describe how this left me feeling. It was achingly poignant and oh-so-beautifully written... and just, SO Hiei!

-big watery walrus eyes- that's... so...sad... -starts crying- that was really well written. Keep up the awesome work

As much as we all love a happy ending, life isn't like fanfiction and sometimes we have to have a sad one. Good story.

Aww, poor Hiei. Yet another story i read where Hiei and Kurama couldn't be together. Except this one is so much better. I really am envious of your talent at writing.

Refreshing! a new series...though in this one, you're telling me that human, gentle...side has died and the youko kurama...to hiei...?

T_T God damn, that was sad. Life can be cruel... and in so many different forms and ways. But, none-the-less, it was... hmm, 'bittersweet', I guess. Good in a sad way.

Er... I'm not really sure what to say. Sorry.

Sad!

tissue box, oh here tissue box, there you are...that was sad...but good.

This is why I don't like stories like this, I was totally crying by the end of it. I like happy endings better, but we can't always have our way. Anyway, this was a very good story and I'm still crying as I write this. You did a great job nailing does these characters, like always. It was so very real, how I would see a parting to a relationship such as theirs, very heartfelt, touching, painful, and achingly beautiful. Please keep up the awesome work. I can't wait to read more stories by you. You are a huge credit to the Yu Yu Hakusho fandom of fan fiction writers. _

PS. I'm still crying here! Now, where are those damn tissues? *_*