You, the writer, had made me shocked to end. Seriously. I normally shy away from sad endings like these, but this one doesn't seem too sad... At least, well, Zexion is still alive, literally and metaphorically.

I was like "OH MY GOD!" when Zexion announced his final decision, and I was hoping a miracle would at least happen. But sadly, muscular dystrophy patients wouldn't survive over their 20's, unless they had undergone some DNA therapy or something. Sigh...

Anyways, nice storyline and a suitable ending. Keep up the good work. And I do enjoy some of the humor in this story. Great job.

wow. if you hear something cracking, that's just my kingdom heart.

anyway, i guess i can. the fanfic was well thought out with a wonderful plot, executed in an adequately worded manner with well done descriptions. a bit cliche at points, like an episode of grey's anatomy, but i fancied it to bits. i spotted no real grammar or spelling errors. the only exceptions were quite a few typos (i am suspecting your spacebar is broken, or that you are not pressing it hard enough). you should give it one more look over and space out those words, since it kind of messes with the readability.

Oh god, you actually got me crying here, and i dont cry... This was, i cant even put into words how beautiful this is

Oh my god...EVERYONE ALWAYS KILLS OFF ZEXION! WHAT THE ACTUAL- ugh..sorry...very good story...I enjoyed reading it even if I wanted to cry! :(

This was so good it made me cry, the /only/ fic to /ever/ make me cry. :')It was just so... sad and cute and... adorable... I'm running out of synonyms here!

*sniff* I'm a sap too...I'm think I'm crying now...

Keep writing yo~

I think this site is in serious need of an update. Putting THIS on my favourite list is just NOT ENOUGH! This is so... ...

More than that, there's nothing I can say/write/think about this that would describe what I'm feeling. And on top of it all, I was listening to a song while I was reading, and when Zexy said "...there is a donor", the song got so SAD, as if it knew...

Amazing job. I hope to see more stories like this from your part in the future D

This story made me cry. I loved it even though I hate sad things) Good job.

Oh my gosh, I cried when I read this, which is a total first for me. I never cry when I'm reading ANYTHING.

...I like this a lot.

awwwww, sweet, i know if i were writing it the ending wouldn't be so cute. they'd both die. which i why i'm not writing it.

it's a sweet idea, but it was kinda rushed jumping from one thing to the next to the next without any indication expect for a different setting. so being a bit clearer would've been nice

but still, it was awesome w

~Evelynn

Super cute and super sad...

That was so sad... And so amazing... TT_TT I feel like I want to cry :'( Kind of makes me think of my friends and I- none of us have problems or anything, but I just can't imagine losing one of the people in our group. I just can't imagine what it would be like. This story really captured that feeling (including an immense feeling of depression...) well. A. You are an amazing author.

You're not a sap! This is one of the best Zemyx fics I've ever read.

Gah its so sad im still crying :'(

amazing

I'm actually crying. I haven't cried in a long, long time...

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.