Reviews for Restoration
Starhunter79 chapter 5 . 2/14/2013
Great story. I love the scheming and misunderstanding. Anakin as the cook and a good padawan was refreshing. A happy ending for everyone involved, I love it
Ancient Galaxy chapter 5 . 11/29/2008
I love the angst ! And fluff ! And scheming Jedi Masters ! Well done ! I hope for a sequel !
Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 5 . 8/10/2008
please complete...por favor?
Shyma Tavrott Lupin chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
omg i was crying from the beggining all the way to the end, this is amazing T_T
HotaruYagami chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
A wonderful fanfic. I read it for the second time yesterday and I so love the way you write about Obi-Wan.

The end is a little bit kitschy, but the rest ist awesome, :)
Majestik Moose chapter 5 . 5/12/2008
Favorite story EVER.

And it's actually inspired me to write another Star Wars fic. So thank you! :D

I loved how you still made Obi-Wan and Anakin friends. I'm sick of reading stories where they're both hateful towards each other. It's not even right.

I also loved how you snuck Obi-Wan singing in there. Ewan McGregor's voice is gorgeous. I don't know if you ever heard it before. But Ewan's singing voice is absolutely breathtaking. I love him.

Oh, and slash was definately the way to go with this story! ;D
Ann Jinn chapter 5 . 4/28/2008
This was just beautiful. Forgiveness doesn't happen with a wave of the wand. Great descriptions - Qui Gon and toast, Anakin and energy.

If you don't feel comfortable with your work, pass it on to a few of us who would be happy to beta and help you out. Sometimes we are more critical with our own work and it is hard to see it objectively.
Llamachick chapter 5 . 4/28/2008
You. Are. A. God! Thank you for sparing my life. -is releived- I have to find out what song he sang now. To the I-POD!

Great job.
pronker chapter 5 . 4/27/2008
Your ending is fine. The angst came through as well as the forgiveness. Is this the end, then, or was 'complete' ticked on the story? If you'd like to try an epilogue, that's okay, just wondering. I liked Bant's inclusion, of course, and the song at the end. You're right, this story does seem a tiny bit familiar, but I didn't begin reading ffn until April '06 so maybe it was before that? Happy writing.
Llamachick chapter 4 . 4/27/2008
Wonderful, amazing, fantastic, why haven't you written any in a year! I love this and will die if you don't write more. That's right, I'll DIE. And then all of the fans of my stories will come after you. And I would wish that on anyone.

PLEZ?

-drowns you in cookies-
yo tadaiima chapter 4 . 10/13/2007
OMG OMG OMG!

FINALLY! Another Obi angst for me to gobble up *smirks*

I've read alot of Obi angst where Qui Gon neglected him for Anikin, but i don't think i've actually read one where Anikin was not portrayed as a evil little kid.

I think I like your idea better, seeing as i don't actually HATE anikin, and seeing him and obi become rivals over Qui Gon is just too sad

I hope to see your update soon! And don't forget your other fics! (though i'm keeping a special eye out for this one )
Concise Complexity chapter 4 . 9/3/2007
So angsty... But I love it.

The thought of Obi singing is somewhat amusing to me! XD

Love your fic! I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
Phoenix Red Lion chapter 4 . 6/27/2007
Nice job! And Bant is in here! YES! I always loved her in the novels! She was so neat and perfect friend for Obi-Wan. You did a great job writing her. I'm glad to see that Obi-Wan still has a close tie to Bant.

I'm anxious to see how this dinner goes. I'm glad to see that Obi-Wan doesn't appear to dislike Anakin, cause it really isn't the boy's fault. I'm also wanting to see if people are really nervous around Obi-Wan...as ya suggested eariler...or if it is all really in his head now that a year has passed.

Great job and update soon! This is fun to read and I always look forward to seeing the next chapter. But it is the same with all of your stories!
dragonzice chapter 4 . 6/25/2007
She was not going to let her friend self-destruct without trying to help him. hahahaha XD for some reason that makes me laugh :D
Fhulhi the Crazy chapter 4 . 6/25/2007
Dream on, Obi-Wan. That scheming little troll will be harder to trick than that! Loved the chapter.
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