Can you write about what Heero does when he discovers what Relena does in the shower while thinking about him? It would be amusing to see how he reacts once he realizes that Relena isn't nearly as pure as he previously thought she was

Now if only he knew what Relena does to herself at night out of desire for him...then he'd have no reason to hold back ;)

Love it. Shows that Heero is a normal male with desires too. Wish there's a sequel though. :p

excellent story

Good God. If I promised to write a similar flame ordering you against narrating gorgeous ficlets such as this... would you write more? That was just.. perfect. Grr. It's not fair! I wannit! Mine! Gimme!

I LOVE this. I've always suspected so much about his feelings on the matter. So many complex feeling accompany physical affection, why wouldn't it be confusing to someone who's never known it? Love, love, love.

lol

you freaking rock. Raye B. - consider your ass kicked.. by a kiss.

Amazing description. Love it!

The fact that this awesomely written little piece was dedicated to a review that condemned the very deed in which you described is just ... epic. Yes. Epic win. Thank you for sharing.

omg i loved ur description! ive always wanted to read a fic about this moment~ i loved blindtarget it was so good. This is really short, sweet, and to the point.

whoever wrote that comment HAHAHHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAAHHA. thats really funny LOL "i will personally kick your ass." LOL.

yea that part is very meaningful though because heero never shows his emotions and it always makes you wonder if theyre together or not. this is a very well written interpretation off the event _~

That very well could have been going through his mind as he almost kissed her... hehe.

*tries not to burst out laughing from the review*...Ah hell, it didnt work, I fell to the ground laughing. That is a wonderful slap in their face now isnt it? LOVELY short, You descirbed that in a very wonderful manner! Keep up the wonderful work!...and add a kiss scene or two in there _~ Sicne you do it so well! I think I'll have to read the rest of your stories now *noddles*...wait...do I have to say I'll kick your ass to, in order to get you to write another one like this? Or...can I just say please? XD

Keep up the great work!

Carol

Good idea. You should always challenge flamers. :D I loved this story. It was short though. u_u

Ooh... Such description, Iris! I do feel sorry for Heero in this one.

Awesome job!

~~Morrighan

P.S. I loved "Ante Up!". _~

hhmm...

it was sweet how you wrote heero's feeling and reaction to the kiss... _

great job!