cool, and ill give the game a try

Beautiful. At first I thought it was Sleeping Beauty, but you've mixed in your own mythology too, haven't you?

consfusement...O.O

beautiful.

Beautiful.

If you were ever to come back to this, you might want to rewrite the very first paragraph, which has the potential to be a lot more powerful. But otherwise, amazing work.

The entire story flows very well. Never once was there a point in it that was awkward or seemed out of place. It was so poetic, especially toward the end. Wonderful. I loved it.

Aw... so cute. I felt each of her emotions. I like the whole 'dawn princess' thing, since the aurora is the dawn.

Ah-do-ah-bul.

This is a wonderful, wonderful, beautiful story.

~Nixie