oh god. what could have been... this was pretty awesome.

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

Lolcakes, that was funny

No way I'm interested in someone with that kind of firepower. His train of thought paused before, finally, wrecking entirely.

I bet Zorpox would be…

Then later in the episode Zorpox prefers to turn Kim evil first. I think we all know who Zorpox prefers after that.

very cool bravo bravo

Just great, especially good job working the episode into it. Most impressive.

Oh yes, Ron's got it bad for Shego. I guess Kim gave him a taste for super-competent Action Girls. Surely she'd eat him alive.

This is really well done, fleshing out Ron behind the surface of the episode. It's all really in character, but deeper. I like the shadow of thought thar Ron feels he's missing something since "Bad Boy". Excellent. Well done.

"his mind – faithless, faithless mind - chose to linger on memories of her ... roughly tying him to pillars..."

Oh dear...

Fantastic story! As both a Zorpox fan and a part-time Rongo shipper, I loved this story. The way you described Ron's flashback and his power rush, as well as how you wrapped up the fic while staying canon was excellent! I hope to read more from you soon.

Oops, I've now seen "Stop Team Go", so disregard my last comment. D'oh.

Great fun, and all seemed in character (apart from Shego using the phrase "cocoa-moo") Well done.

Very nice. I am a big fan of the Rongo pairing. I was rather upset that Shego was turned back to evil at the very end. I still think things would of been way more interesting if she would've stayed good. I have some ideasd that may wind up in a fic one-dday. We'll see. Keep up the good writing. Peace

Very very funny! I loved it! Well done!

That is an interesting way of making Ron think. I doubt he would be think about Shego that way, but it was very interesting to read.

Danny

RonH,

It was good to peek inside Ron's head during this truly awk-weird moment.

I knew the whole sitch was silly (as the title stated), but the way it threw him for a loop was brilliantly portrayed.

It's a good thing Kim did not have mind-reading capabilities. Otherwise, Ron would have once again dealt with 'sudden impact'!

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird

Hilarious and definitely well written. I read this and saw the episode later on and if I was drinking something, it would spurt out of my nose. Ron's luck that he keeps these things to himself...Keep up the good work.