| Reviews for BurnOut |
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  Dusktodawn21 chapter 39 . 9/30/2018 Wow! Such a great story. Hope you come back and finish this. Thanks |
 avengersemh chapter 39 . 9/27/2015 I love this story so much and I can't wait for the next chapter! X-men: Evolution was a fantastic show and you have created such a wonderful continuation of it in your story. Your descriptions and in-depth plot are better than a lot of published books I've read. I hope you're still working on this! |
| amethyst-dreams27 chapter 39 . 5/28/2013 This was an interesting story. Some great plot twists. I like that you tried a pairing that not many have done before. |
| FivePhoenix chapter 16 . 3/23/2013 You really do go above and beyond the average fan. Nice work! |
| FivePhoenix chapter 14 . 3/18/2013 These are one of the moments, Jean, when you absolutely CANNOT flip out! |
| FivePhoenix chapter 13 . 3/18/2013 Ugh... Scott. Too jealous and protective for his own good. |
| FivePhoenix chapter 8 . 3/17/2013 It's good that Jean is earning her freedoms back. I kinda feel sorry for Scott. He's losing his girl to a rich guy. I can't imagine how painstakingly difficult it is for Scott to see Jean and Warren share something beyond emotion. |
| FivePhoenix chapter 6 . 3/17/2013 Oh, gosh. Charles really did it this time. |
| FivePhoenix chapter 5 . 3/17/2013 Ahh... Angels The rich and handsome ones are even better. |
| FivePhoenix chapter 4 . 3/17/2013 "I won't try to stop you. I'll go with you." I don't know what Warren's thinking... but if a guy ever said that to me, I'd blush like crazy. |
| FivePhoenix chapter 3 . 3/17/2013 I love the relationship portrayed between Rogue and Jean, and Scott and Jean. The psychic connection between Jean and Rogue adds a certain level of understanding to your story... That was the best of the chapter. |
| FivePhoenix chapter 2 . 3/17/2013 Wow. I could visualize everything in your writing. I admire how you make the telepathic messages in italics with its own paragraph. It makes it so... organized. Jean's condition is worsening, but I think Moira can help. What are your thoughts on Jean in X-Men: Evolution? Majority of people don't like her because they think she's snotty, but I've always thought she had a great sense of leadership.. she DID give a speech at high school graduation. Now that I think about it, Warren didn't receive as much attention in Evo. He should have. |
| FivePhoenix chapter 1 . 3/17/2013 I love Warren. I'm guessing this Phoenix is the dark mental one, correct? Not the cosmic entity? |
| XXdarkphoenixXX chapter 39 . 6/29/2012 this is really good. I think this is my favorite fan fiction story ever, I love it. please please keep updating! would love it if you made a jott story btw ;) |
| whylime13gmail.com chapter 39 . 7/17/2011 Amazing story - it's grown much deeper and complex than I ever thought it would, the chapters are a bit long for me but always well worth the time. |
