| Reviews for Alpha Female |
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   12lawmanj chapter 1 . 1/31/2019 This story is long dead, but the thing bothers me most about it is the appalling writing, this reeks of first draft desperation. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/29/2018 what is happening? |
| LadyBelladona chapter 5 . 4/28/2018 My expectations were way too high for this. |
| Anonymus chapter 4 . 3/18/2018 Please continue I LOVE this fan-fiction. |
| Anonymus chapter 3 . 3/18/2018 I LUV THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| Alpha chapter 15 . 1/6/2018 Can Hermione and Fenrir have pups not just Amelia |
| Silver WolfXxx chapter 16 . 12/8/2017 Please write more, its been a decade - A DECADE! This story is amazing, you can't abandon it! Please write more! |
| Silver WolfXxx chapter 17 . 11/21/2017 Please write more! |
| Silver WolfXxx chapter 12 . 11/20/2017 This story is great! But so bloody and dark as well... I love it! |
| Wynterlace chapter 17 . 3/2/2017 Cute story, continue writing |
| Lucyole chapter 17 . 7/15/2016 Really great story, very interesting, sweet, dramatic and funny please write more that would be great of you thanks you *Cookies for you* |
| Cool kitty chapter 3 . 7/11/2016 It was strange, I don't like that hermione was captured. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/23/2016 Interesting story... for Hermione to embrace the wolf so willingly and being the leader of the pack. Hard to believe that Harry can't understand that Hermione is over 20 years old and don't want to come back. How can he possibly thinking killing her family and kidnapping her is a good idea? Being a friend and a bit prejustice is one thing, a obsessed slaver/kidnapper/murderer is another. Furthermore, Harry cast the killing curse 2 times against Voldemort? Wtf? Your Harry and the Order are totally OC, in a bad way, but it's your fiction... |
| mady chapter 17 . 3/18/2016 why the hell did ron die. p.s why did she pick Fenrir |
| Silvia.Frovel chapter 17 . 11/15/2015 I know its been years but please I need to know the ending and if the order comes to its senses and stood being evil |
