Reviews for Fracture
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14
SegĂșn Newton, fuerzas iguales pero opuestas son igual a 0, por o tanto Naru no siente nada por el jajajaja
soggy noodle chapter 3 . 2/2/2018
Mutsumi and Kanako are greatly underused characters in terms of pairing (one more so than the other for an obvious reason).

Glad to see someone of skill decided to write such a story.
DaMan chapter 7 . 11/11/2017
Good one. I always wondered about the lack of stories about this pairing.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/31/2017
Dunno what this Zenny guy said but if he advised to leave out that scene there at the end between Mutsumi and Motoko then I would have to agree; it was awkward and really unnecessary.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 6 . 3/13/2017
I call bullshit. And it isn't a "lesser man" that would have called the police, it is a smart man. Hell a smart person or just someone who realizes a danger to their own life and the lives of others who would call the police. Ha! Perfect women my shiny metal ass. Also just realized that Mutsumi's kids must be adopted since she's a virgin but where are they at tho?
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 5 . 3/13/2017
Don't be a bigger big bitch Naru. Geez.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 4 . 3/13/2017
Well hopefully Kanako doesn't pull the same stunt on Kitsune since her issues with Keitaro are resolved.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 3 . 3/13/2017
Lol those females suuuuuuuck. Go Otahime! She's got my vote.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 2 . 3/13/2017
Mutsumi already has kids?! How'd...when did that happen?
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
I cried bruh.
swartzvald chapter 3 . 7/6/2014
Also would have accepted kit/kei, but this is good too.
COBRASTEVE chapter 7 . 4/10/2014
Wow, this was really well done and having him together with mitsu was just the best!
I'll start one of your other stories.
COBRASTEVE chapter 3 . 4/8/2014
I really hope you're not just teasing with this Mutsumi / Keitaro thing. That would really be great and serve Naru right! Great story!
KeroGuardian chapter 2 . 3/10/2014
Oh, gosh. My heart hurts so bad for Keitaro. I don't know why, but that line where Keitaro thinks about how Kitsune shouldn't get mixed in w/the wrong crowd just made me want to cry. I'm surprised you actually remembered her occupation. I forgot she even had a job!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2/2014
Its called a gay warning for a reason. Gender doesn't matter,not everyone reads gay fiction.
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