As obvious as it is that English isn't your first language. I find it commendable the work you have presented. Damn fine job, and keep practicing.

Wait is this ranma 1/2? Interesting start.

I must admit I loved the plot and I saw a lot of spellig errors but I honestly don't care. It was a good story but I didn't like the way you killed off Clair. As a fan of gender bender stories I would've liked it to be the opposite, that Harry died and Clair would live. Otherwise I had a good time reading this story.

love it

protego not protege

I have been reading this story and although I would seriously love to enjoy it your lack of grammar ruins it for me. If you can't get a beta you should get someone you know and trust to proof read it for you before you post anymore chapters as this may help you. We all make mistakes but if you make this many grammar mistakes then you obviously need help. Nice effort all the same.

well done good story.

Grammar: 3/10
Plot: 7/10
Writing: 5/10
Claire: -1
Total: 6/10

I am truly sorry but your as simple minded as JK is when it comes to building up relationships. I think you need to spend some time in the real world or in this case the Muggle world and learn what it is to actually build up to a romantic relationship in order to improve your story.

I am sorry but it seems like the chapters are getting shorter and ruining the quality to the Originality that was this story even though there has been a lot of details in the story that it is truly lacking.

Do you hate Hedwig? I have not seen you once mention her sense she was his first and the fact that you had sent her to the Weaselys for just the four weeks we should have seen some mention of Hedwig by now.

The formatting as well as missing words to have a sentence being coherent would be a huge improvement especially for this chapter. I don't know if I will ever be able to get into this story because of this type of problem that I have come across in these three chapters.

Ok you seem to have cover the CL part for me now but you still aren't doing much for the whole curse thing. You put it on it should be a whole lot clearer then what it is. Also I am one of those that can admit that there is a chance for love between Ginny and Harry but not as much as what JK did and what so many fans that do it seem to think. Ginny ruins a lot of her chances at things from what I read and saw, Plus unless it was in a lot of scrap paper that JK did while writing there was more of a real romance build up between Harry and Hermione then there ever was of Harry and Ginny. Sorry but that is what I saw and have come to believe. The people that put Hermione with Ron like JK did are insane to me because there was no build up to it what so ever Ron was the light side version of Draco and Hermione made it clear that she would have to be forced or drugged to ever consider that as a valible option so I don't see how she would end up with Ron in an honest to god type of relationship what so ever. I would also like it if your chapters were longer I use the scroll bar as my judge not the word count as that is misleading here at Fanfiction.

I honestly don't know what to think one CL don't know this person not one of the ones that were ever consider main and not enough to really recall as a side character. The whole curse thing is to much a long the lines of Ranma 1/2 with out going to that universe but stole the concept from it none the less. The whole elemental thing is along an original thought though. Problem you don't do to well in the focus on the why and how that Harry is changed. And yes even with reading this chapter word for word I can't pick up on these factors which are important factors for the whole bases for this concept of the story that you are writing.

Besides the bad grammar, this story is way too weird.

First, you have the Order watching a random muggle shopping mall, instead of diagon alley, and somehow think the girl is harry. Then you have Harry captured randomly when not even the Order knows, and they've been watching her closely. There is no lead up, how, or why.

While the story itself is mostly interesting, I just felt the need to point out that you need more.