OMG! I loved! loved! loved! this story! I am so gonna red the sequel! You are just amazing a writing Sesshomaru love stories, they are just awesome! Keep it up! (hugs and flowers for you, for writing such an amazing story!) :)

some times im kinda scard to read this story ...it makes me cry all the time i know its silly but i can help it

i was cering to this sometimes why did he have to be such a jerk oooooooooooooooooooany way i love it

awesome.

That is a very important question... Do ants sleep?... TO THE ANT FARM! And i agree with you on the alcohol being gross. It smells bad too. and the Kikyo not being paired with people and the Sesshoumaru being paired with OC's. POWER TO THE AVENGER LOVERS! Loki is freaken hillarious. I love Grell and Sebastian lol. Clowns not so much, I hven't been able to stand them since I watched It by Stephen King. Sim's is my favorite game too lol, what ones do you play? I promi I'm no a creep stalker lol, I read yor profile while looking fo this story because I saw the sequal but wanted to read this first. Which so far I like. Any who, onto the rest of the story! Then the ant farm!

Ohmyword, best story ever! It's so romantic and cute :3 yet depressing O_O even though Helen and Sesshomaru don't exactly get together it's such a cool story , well done though :D

YOU! ... I can't friggin' believe iiit... *sobs* I was hoping ! so much hoping! There were chapters, were i thought "hey cool thing, man. Captn Fluffy FINALLY admits it. i like him" and then BOOM - he just fucking crushes her heart into pieces! *cries pathetically* ... but you made real good story. it was always very interesting and due to the many twists and turns never really boring. i think you got the characterization (sorry if wrong spelling :D) very good and the thoughts and feelings were described very well.
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OH! before i forget it.
Have you seen Captn Fluffy anywere? Cause, ya know I am very eager to show him how much it hurts when you get stabbed several times. also is he in honor in getting a free haircut!
*Sesshy slowly walks away*
YOU STAY HERE, MORON! *dashes after sesshy*

OMAGOSH!

This book was AMAZING! When I read the end I said, "NOOOOOOOOOO!" Well obviously I got a couple stares for that. But I calmed down after the note. Anyhoo, off to read the sequel! :D

Ok, so I was ready to lop off some heads...(hehe, chapter reference!) And now I must read the sequel!

Good beginning but waaayy too much drama. It was annoying. Unsatisfying ending left the drama unresolved.

. . ...THIS STORY OH MY GOD! It's awesome, awesome so awesome it's 3 in the morning and I'm still reading it on a school night! YES ITS THAT AWE- *sleeps*

i can't wait to read the sequel! it has got to be just as awesome as this one though...

I'll admit, the first part was ok. An then she started getting angsty and started to be clingy. The whole thing was spent trying on getting together, and breaking up. I got tired of it. An then thy didn't even end up together at the end and now you want to write a sequel? Seriously?

WAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! It ENDED! I was gonna kill you for making her leave, but you better have them together in the sequel, or I WILL, and I'm bringing Kagome, InuYasha AND Sesshomaru!

Sesshomaru: What makes you think I;ll help you?

Mental: Oh, shut up we all know you're a bipolar doofus and you TOTALLY want Helen back. *said perfectly calmly*

Mental: *walks away*

Sesshomaru: *stares*

InuYasha: *laughs*

Kagome: Ha. SOMEONE doesn't beat around the bush.

Sesshomaru: What is that supposed to mean.

Kagome: Uh... Mental, WAIT UP! He's gonna KILL ME!