Reviews for Forging the Sword
Username to be determined chapter 7 . 7/24
I'm feeling some sense of disbelief, in that given the divergence in mentality between Harry here and how he is depicted in cannon, that he has ended up selecting the same electives as those in cannon.
pleasecomeback chapter 15 . 7/23
I’ve found your story a month ago from Reddit only to realize after finished it the first time that it hasn’t been updated in six years. it’s my third times reading it and I just want to say, I love it and I wish you would continue.. please comeback
Guest chapter 12 . 6/21
this is freaking amazing! i love that you have described all the characters very well - there is no bashing, and you capture ron hermione & harry amazingly. you can see their personalities- harry has a vicious streak, hermione has an adventurous one, and ron is very very vengeful & protective. i wonder what will happen next what with durmstum and how the students are going to react to having a half-blood and muggleborn in their midst. I can't help but wonder who the other person is, i assume someone is slytherin. also, i love the name of the chapters, i see what you did there.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/21
Oh.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/21
My.
Guest chapter 15 . 6/21
God.
Hvwgjjv chapter 2 . 6/16
Bullshit
Spidersauce chapter 11 . 6/12
I like this story's insight into Ron more than possibly any other. The idea that Ron views Harry as pretending and lying and all that about his being special and all that just puts a whole different spin to canon Ron's jealousy about Harry. Ron doesn't comprehend that Harry sees himself as nothing special, as -just Harry- because he can't believe any sentient intelligent being could come to that conclusion. Examples given were brilliantall the things that we as readers chalk to "protagonist syndrome" have no such easy explanation in-story. The troll, the dragon, the Unicorns and riding a centaur, on and on. That shit just doesn't happen to anyone else! The closest it does is Ron and Hermione having it happen to them through proximity. Harry is fundamentally special. There can be no accurate unbiased disagreement for that, really. So Ron, especially a young childish Ron, could very easily see that as Harry lying and playing it off and pretending. "Oh come off it, Harry" as Ron says about the Goblet of Fire stuff. He is so used to Harry lying about being special and whatnot that he just assumes Harry is lying about entering too.
Spidersauce chapter 7 . 6/12
It isn't ever explicitly mentioned, but there is evidence of some sort of magical learning aid in the canon books.
Barty Crouch Sr. is known to be fluent in, what, 117 languages? No way that's naturally learnt. Whether it's implanted knowledge, memory enhancement, or any number of things, there has to be something they can do even canonically.
Spidersauce chapter 2 . 6/11
So does Harry still have the sword? It has never made sense to me to give it to Dumbledore.
stevem1 chapter 15 . 6/1
This is a brilliant story. I hope it’s completed some day.
stevem1 chapter 6 . 6/1
McGonagall lands on the contempt list.

Harry wants to become a better wizard but told divination?
stevem1 chapter 5 . 6/1
It’s scenes like this that make me feel contempt for Dumbledore. Death, pain and misery, and he takes no action and does not allow others to take action
Guest chapter 15 . 5/30
This abandoned or on another site?
SafaiaFureia chapter 15 . 5/20
*grumbles* It's been nearly six years since an update. I hope that you are going to write more as this has been an absolutely enthralling fic! I realize there is a LOT that you would need to flesh out... but you could also just do the tournament parts perhaps and maybe have Harry and Hermione (perhaps the Bulgarian as well, though his name escapes me at the moment) discussing the trials. Then have them end up at home after all of the shenanigans.
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