Beautifully written. The emotions here feel very true to character.

Good ol' Martha keeping the doctor in check. Nicely done

Rather sad. I like it though.

Thanks for writing.

I like the tempo of the writing. Even the dialogue is well placed.

Absolutely beautiful, and a precise, dead-on Martha voice. Thank you for this.

aww, fantastic! A great read:-) really well written!

I really liked this story, the tone and the pace of it especially. Lovely characterisation, to boot.

*adds to favourites*

Hehe, brilliant! Love the idea of the Doctor hiding from the sun - his actions say SO much more than him just simply telling her. Very clever :D

This was marvellous!

It leads in so nicely to the idea that the Doctor might remove all his emotions in 'Human Nature' too.

Please add this to the 'Teaspoon and an Open Mind' archive, if you haven't already. :)

Thanks,

Erya.

Very sweet and well written.

Oh, wow!

Beautifully crafted piece, and you've captured the Doctor's mismatch of emotion so perfectly! Wonderful! _

Keep on writing!

Blessed Be!

Peanu x

Absolutely beautiful. xxHMC

Oh, this is lovely. The Doctor's certainly been put through the wringer lately, and you catch all his emotions so perfectly.

Who's the girl in the yellow jacket? Susan, maybe?

Oh, well done! Beautiful prose there, my friend, and excellent characterizations. :) Ta very much for a lovely story!

Very nice...wonderful diction! A great piece.