I nearly cried. Seriously, that was great.

Wow I'm crying. This was an amazing story. The ending was beautiful but yet so sad.

Oh gosh. i cried horribly. T-T It was lovely. The end was just written beautifully especially Zelos disappearing yet saying what he wanted to say too. Oh gosh, I still can't stop crying! Lovely

...I cried. It made no sense, but I cried...

...

...*sniff*...

That was...beautiful! I think I'm actually...going to cry...

...Wow...this is a big step for me! *favs*

Keep writing Sheelos! I like this feeling!

-Nexus0o

Oh god, I'm crying... heh... this was really really god. I loved it.

i feel like cutting myself now!

AH I love this story! Haven't read a ToS fic in a while! Only complaint I have is that 'Persia' is 'Presea' But other than that, I truly like it!

The first chapter in my opinion was alittle cheesy with the way you explained how the wishing stuff worked. The ending chapter, on the other hand, was GREAT. THE absolute best. So touching. Now I feel all emotional. :_: cry cry sniff sniff.

Don't ever stop writing!

Aww, sosad! ;.; Loved it though. It was so sweet! Anyway. Loved it. Looking forward to your next fic.

~Red

Simply lovely. I like it a lot. The feelings, personalities, and settings are wonderfuly described. You've perfected the characters' personalities and vernacular. Plus, your sense and prolonging of suspense is talent-worthy. Congrats, on first chapter. Can't wait for next chapter, until next time, happy writing!

Aw, it was sweet, in my opinion. I always believed that was why they were such a sweet couple; they both needed someone to keep them from angsting. ;)

-Tabbz

"sniff"

"sniff"

..."sniffs some more"

"hyperventilating"

"crying"

WAH! Why! Did you have to end it like that, so beautiful the way you did however. But many questions still lie in the darkness, who is that strange little girl, and Zelos died again. NO!

Well, this turned out a little not what I expected, I thought you were going to write more, if you want, please continue, or make a sequel or wtvr. Well at least you had them tell each other they love each other, that is key to a romance fic. LOL!

I luve this! Great job! _ And np for that! Ty for mentioning me! XD

~*ToFS

Bittersweet, sad... but... I couldn't keep from smiling at this. IT was sad, ad I kidna wished the ending were a bit happier, but you closed it really well, and a part of me says that I couldn't be happier in the end. the little thoughts in between the paragraphs made the story more powerful... I could almost imagining this as an animation or something.

Loved it, it was sweet, at least they could tell each other they loved each other. Keep writing Zelos/Sheena stuff! I look forward to whatever you decide to write.

This is so emotional, I can actually feel the well how should I put this, intensity and movement, and it most definitely is not rushed.

I especially like three things, how you created the "flesh hitting flesh" thing, calling Sheena a kunouchi, and Zelos calling her a "dear screaming banshee," even though it's supposed to be Violent Demonic Banshee, but it's your own creation and that's what makes it unique. And you probably knew that before, but you just wanted to have something different.

Update or else! ARGH!

~*ToFS

Naw, there wasn't any OOCNESS, as long as you have a smack or two then it's Sheelos. XD

This is awesome, it's not like one of those hit and run fics (I like to call the kind of romance fics where they just ended at the part where they blush and wat not). I'm going to read the next chappie.

I luve this fic!

~*ToFS